Waves

When you are with the right one in the right place.

Your hands in mine,
Our feet moving in kindred rhythm.
With each wave kissing the shoreline,
Ours footprints disappearing.
The soft breeze was the melody,
Your fast heartbeat was the song.
With you there in my arms,
The night was still sweet and young.
No one to disrupt us,
Just you, me and the sea.
Dancing with the waves,
I found peace in your vicinity.

Author's Note

I'm only a beginner so ignore if there are any mistakes. Thanks.

Reviews

[K writes]

Ours footprints disappearing.
The soft breeze was the melody,
Your fast heartbeat was the song.
With you there in my arms,

Such sweet lovely thoughts, this is a beautiful and lovely piece

[Kerra]

what a lovely read here, this is beautiful

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This was a very lovely poem Violet that captures a precious moment of love in the grandeur splendor of nature. Thank you for sharing your words with us.

[Violet]

Thanks this means a lot