like this river

like this river

A Poem by Danielle Asher

3 hour train ride with a ghost

the Hudson to my right

my left hand free to hold

yours

the only hand I could imagine holding mine

 

time passes creating opposing currents

like this river

growing wider in beauty

and wisdom

advancing beyond my inconstant soul

remaining still, this one thing

afraid to say it aloud

or write it on this paper now...

you

© 2009 Danielle Asher


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i have missed your writing and you.
this is beautiful Danielle
i love your style and the last line.. this is beautifully written
peace
Chloe
xoxo

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice, descriptive, from the heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Danielle Asher
Danielle Asher

not what you would expect, Long Island, NY



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