Haiku #1

I have never written a Haiku. Let me know if it is terrible form. Thanks!

 

He’s back in my life

Our connection unexplained

Why say I love you?

Author's Note

i've never written a Haiku before so if I didn't do it right, feel free to let me know. thanks.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Good job. Simply put, I do hope it cleared your mind a little.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Haiku (Hokku), is usually about some form of nature, where as a Senryu tend to be about human foibles. So, technically speaking, this is a Senryu - but the 5-7-5 syllable format and creative subject matter tends to make me say - who cares - it's a great write!

Phill(ozofee)

[mattavelli]

Who's back in your life?