him and harm

him and harm

A Poem by Danielle Asher

can not quite figure out my worth

if i went by debt, that certainly would not say much for me

if i went by the quality of bravery it would go up quite a bit

i was willing to put my life on the line for a stranger

put myself between him and harm

on instinct

for justice

for him

 

wonders of the world

ignorance or justice

the scales of life

and I wonder what I want

or where I fit

to love a muscian or a solder

am i even alive?

too much positve

too much negative

just enough me

giving me

 

I put myself between him and harm

on instinct

 

I would do it again

on principal and a chance at love

it was by chance

instinct

© 2008 Danielle Asher


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WHen we are in love....we go by our feelings and instinct...we dont know if its the right thing to do...but it feels likes its the right thing at the right time........ in the long term it may not....

i like how u stated...to love a musician or a soldier..... both are kind of the same..the musician lives the dream of becoming a big...but the the soldier risks his life and would leave u alone...... but forget the profession...what matters if you are in love with that person or their occupation...great piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


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WHen we are in love....we go by our feelings and instinct...we dont know if its the right thing to do...but it feels likes its the right thing at the right time........ in the long term it may not....

i like how u stated...to love a musician or a soldier..... both are kind of the same..the musician lives the dream of becoming a big...but the the soldier risks his life and would leave u alone...... but forget the profession...what matters if you are in love with that person or their occupation...great piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so I came back to remind myself whom you were and what your work was, i read lots today n didnt wanna be talking out my a*s;)
I only remembered my opinion of your picture, which was high.

I caught this on second read
bravory it would : bravery?

first review still stands;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats dope, the idea that you'd do it on instinct, such a pure idea, insane and awesome when it comes about in real life. you just gotta be thankful for those times, that someone could prompt such rich spirtit out of us;)

I like your style/ability;)
so neat and insightful and surprising, effortlessly. very cool

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Danielle Asher
Danielle Asher

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