Whole

Whole

A Poem by Danielle Asher

 

Smoke a cigarette to feel something >inside me

> You make me normal again > feel something

> not love > trust > everything > no harm here >

another cigarette > another drink >  I am whole

© 2008 Danielle Asher


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boy theres a lot of people doing just that:-) In the end we are all
a people of potions and we picks our poison and takes our risks

Posted 16 Years Ago


Pass the tequila, a short and interesting piece but still good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extremly nice piece that expresses strong emotions so well with so few words...I "feel" you! ~ Jude xo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 4, 2008

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Danielle Asher
Danielle Asher

not what you would expect, Long Island, NY



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I care about faith,Justice, Equity for all, Peace, love,working toward letting go of all judgment,music, dancing, traveling as much of the world as I can and Chocolate! check out IVAW.org read my fri.. more..

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