how far we have come

 

They finally left and I can stop being funny

Being smart

I can be true again

They always wanted to know about the stories

All of them were about him

Not anymore but

Lingering thoughts

Memories

How I feel today

Means so much

The bar is thick

Holds the weight of

Us

The stories

The secrets

The truth

Fix me

Fix you

See how far we have come

Author's Note

if you comment on my grammar be specific please. I already know i have bad grammar and spelling. Thanks!

Reviews

[Michael]

Even though it doesn't say it, it sounds as if you were writing about a loved one that has passed what gives me that idea is these lines;

They always wanted to know about the stories

All of them were about him

Not anymore but

Lingering thoughts

Memories

Over all it was a good write.

[Cynthia Barrick (CHING..]

EXECELLENT

[Lloyd]

Haha, I laugh at your explanation. This is great. This is my favorite I've read today, in fact, I'll stop with this, excellent poem, great imagery. Hope to read some more tomorrow. Again, Awesome!

[JC Fox]

This reminds me of the Matchbox 20 song and I have that playing in my head as I read this, what a great piece.