passing

 

Every second passing

You are different forever

Never able to get that precious time back

Changed in a moment

Forward moving

The past left behind

Kept in the present only

By the breath you blow into its memory

Reviews

[JC Fox]

Another great piece! Good job

[Brandon]

cool. that was really fresh!

[Mark Pearce]

Transcendental, you is.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

So true.. this is a wonderful poem and the message should be heeded .. we only need to think of Katrina, 9/11 .. Iraq, so many things that happen and then it is too late to be back in that time when maybe you said something hurtful or were just indifferent.. well written and such a message you have for us.
Thank you ..

Chloe
xoxo

[Marie]

Nicely written my friend.