Berry Crush

hmmmm

 

I gave him a blue pen

As a sad attempt to flash my smile

Give him something tangible to remember me by

Though my giggle will echo in his ears

Month after month

I search for the connection

I know it’s not height

Where we live

Or where we were born

It is found in politics but not in religion

Month after month

Across the table

I declare my crush

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Wow...I like this! Different, makes ya think!
"Though my giggle will echo in his ears" - I especially love this line and the thought of you giggling makes me smile...

[JC Fox]

A wonderful piece, and yes I know such helpful reviews lol great job.

[Brandon]

Nice. Its almost like your a dictator, declaring a cold war on another country.

[Cece]

as the title i thought
a delicious drink fruity
so wrong i was actually

i see a boardroom meeting
with people grouped around
a chance look from across the table

[Mark Pearce]

A nice insight into an attraction.

With about the same amount of information - and lack of information - as we all have to go on.

Well represented.