out in the sun

not really in love, or am i, was i?

I want to kiss you to remember you taste

I drive around this town

knowing we share the streets

yet I can only walk in one door to see you

and walk out one door to leave you

but not behind

it rains today

and I would love you in this percepitation

or in snow like before

though I would prefer to walk with you out in the sun

Reviews

[Emily B]

to see you, to leave you. . . love this.

[R J Askew]

I like the doors in this one...they seem to symbolise so much. And I like the idea of you driving around, wondering, speculating, yearning perhaps. I wonder what your love object would think on knowing your thoughts! And yes a walk in snow could be romantic but a little sun might help things along more. The sun and the snow are also symolic or much.

[Cece]

whether in the sun
or out in the sun
rain or snow keeps
us from our rounds

dont think it matters
in the sun or not
romance is light
but emotions are deep

[forfila]

Interesting, very thoughful and romantic. I did enjoy the read very much. I will just blab on here a bit, probably irrelevant but, its funny how hard satisfaction is to find, like you say But I would prefer to walk with you out in the sun" but if that sun got to hot, then "we'd be wanting to walk in the rain" I know I am off track with your meaning, but it is just a point I would like to bring up as this poem made me think of it.

Much enjoyed

Love
Me