Awards in Consistency

Awards in Consistency

A Poem by Danielle Asher
"

5 years. too many lives and what is it all for? I always ask how he sleeps at night?

"

 

Five years going strong

Awards in consistency

Dont let go

Dont get out

Dont loose the course

What would people say if you changed your mind now?

They would say you flip flopped,

Say you wavered

Call you a weak commander in chief.

Dont break your promise

You promised it would be here for the next in line to handle

Nobody wants to be alone

Do it alone

No one

Stay Strong

Be the one that everyone will remember

And they will.

 

 

Tonight when you go to sleep instead of sheep,

 I have something else for you to count:

 

3,980 U.S Deaths

29,320 Wounded

 

81,874-89,853

Documented Iraqi Civilian Deaths from Violence

 

© 2008 Danielle Asher


Author's Note

Danielle Asher
if you are Pro-war or Pro death as I see it, this time, i ask you to keep it to yourself. I am feeling emotional about how many lives have been taken for what I feel is unnecessary and unjust reasons. I don't want to argue over that.



Numbers from the start of the war, March 2003

(stats gotten from Veterans from Peace Website and Iraq Body Count Website)

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ugh, beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


I'd like if they were brought home. I have a cousin over there. Great write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pfft I won't even go into my opinions on the idiocy of the war and the death count. There was no point and Bush is a f*****g retard...thank you very much. Now this was another wonderfully penned piece

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely vented,, very deep,, I like it BRING THEM HOME!!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Danielle Asher
Danielle Asher

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