crush on a schoolboy

oh he was so adorable but it never would have worked

You are the most delightful view from across the room

Puppies are my favorite and my crush on you pertains to that

Maybe I should never know you so I can enjoy the simplicity of your smile

I'd love to kiss you and never know more than your lips

Reviews

[prettyzombiegirl]

I know this feeling all too well so these words make me smile! Great job!

[mattavelli]

That's sweet. :)
Take care.

[Wolfwind Words]

To know only a persons lips. I can relate in a twisted way. I liked this little peice of romantic notions.
Are you saying that this boy or this crush was like a puppy? And the puppy being your favorite made the boys lips your favorite?
It was cute!
Good work!

[NJ Schneider]

I loved it, even though it was really small, it touched me... I ALWAYS have that feeling of lush and just wanting to fantasize about that person believing there is some kind of perfection on the planet without wanting to know who they really are and destroying that perfection. Great job!

[forfila]

what a sweet little poem, what a cute little crush =)

[Mark Pearce]

I believe "any" should be "and" in line two.

The puppies line is an enchanting thought but I think it needs to be refined or polished to make it sparkle. And the possibility of switching lines three and four crossed my mind, giving the piece a stronger conclusion.

Th opening line is a great launch.