Determination

poem from my "no1knowsViolet" collection. for CK

 

Determination

Face to face with bitter cold

the chill sets into your bones

 

A calling

Will that swept you off his feet

Or a rope

No more contemplations pace around his head

But have been passed on to ours

 

Weakness, Strength

What gave him the ability to fulfill the thoughts we have all wept with?

Living in a shadowed world of truth

The colors appear so vividly

EXCEPTIONAL

The spectrum has no limits

 

Resentful

Longing to be a part

To belong, to feel love

To feel anything else

Satisfaction

Maybe Now

Maybe Now

But not ours.

 

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

EXCEPTIONAL poem. I really like the way that you right justified it. That was a really special touch.

I like the lines:

"The colors appear so vividly
EXCEPTIONAL
The spectrum has no limits"

I especially like the way that you capitalized "EXCEPTIONAL."

Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing!

-Gabe

[Requiem]

I think the last stanza is very beautiful. I mean, doesn't want to feel loved (even this book I just read this being of pure evil just wanted someone to love it, even though it was incapable of love itself), but we have this inexplicable feeling that we're not worthy of it.