She Was Mine To Steal

Poem about love and stalking. Contains themes of murder and unrequited love. Please give me a review of what you think and I hope you enjoy!

She Was Mine To Steal

When I first saw her, I knew my life had got brighter,

I wouldn't give up on her as I was always a fighter.

I kept thinking of her, wondering how she would feel,

As I watched her I knew that her heart, I shall steal.

It was becoming to much - the rapture,

Then I followed her - ready to capture.

As she walked, she looking like a fragile lily,

She shivered and saw that she was chilly.

I put my arms around her as I wanted to warm her,

She screamed with terror. What was next to occur?

I put my hand over her mouth to silent my love,

Desperate to escape - she pushed and shoved.

I tried to explain that I didn't want to cause her harm,

I even tried to work my charm.

But she was terrified and didn't want me,

And I really wanted her - she was full of beauty.

So I thought - If I can't have you no one can,

Then I killed her with a knife - like a mad man.

By Violet Stone

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I have done this sort of thing very often. In my dreams, that is. Moo ha ha.

[Violet Stone]

Lol, made me laugh :D

[Mélania Woolf]

OMG.
This stole my heart.
Brilliant.

[Violet Stone]

Thank you so much ^_^ I'm very happy you liked it.

[John Preston]

Was this lust for a woman
Or just sexual desire
I see it's all in rime not mine.

Very good.

[Violet Stone]

It was a little bit of both really but mostly, it was his lust that drove him to such lengths. I'm glad you found it good and thank you for the review.

[John Preston]

Your poetry is pleasing to read. I'd like to see any story's you may have written.

[Violet Stone]

Thank you very much, its great to hear that! I am working on some short stories to publish on here as well as a couple of my books but I wont be putting them on WritersCafe until I have spell checked everything and made sure its perfect, so I'm afraid your going to have to wait a little longer if you want to see any of my stories :)

[cartera]

This is often how it happens, I believe. Love and hurt and embarrassment and blame transfer. Best not to love. Too irrational.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

Very amazing :D I loved this so much :3 it was full of just the right amount of innocence and horror :3

[Violet Stone]

Lol, Thank yooooou :3