Mad and Burning Flare

Poem about abuse, arguments and sadness. Contains some swear words so only for teenagers to read. Leave a review and hope you enjoy it! :)

Mad and Burning Flare

What have I done? I think as he shouts,

But I'm just trying to block him out.

I just want to pretend I didn't hear a thing,

While he stands high, acting like a king.

His authority, as if his words are fact,

While I stay still, hurt and smacked.

My cheek strings from where he hit,

I close my eyes while he threw a fit.

I don't reply and I stay quiet,

The tension in the air is like a riot.

Like a mob starting a fire,

All yelling in unison like a choir.

God, if you are there at all,

Help me, stop me feeling so small!

Holding back my tears, I try to speak,

But prospects of getting through to him look bleak.

I cant bare it, I run from him,

Hands to ears, crying and grim.

He's shouting after me as I shut the door,

Calling me a b***h and a f*****g w***e.

Call me what you will as I don't care,

At least I'm safe from your horrible, burning flare.

By Violet Stone

Author's Note

Leave a review please and hope you enjoy it! :)

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Should be no beatings what the heck he's not worth it not even a peck get out leave as fast as you can for this creator is not a man stand up for your rights to be heard no man strikes you he's a nerd.

[Violet Stone]

Thanks for the review and I agree, he's not worth it at all! :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

It is full of spirit and youthful vigour.. commendable work.

[Violet Stone]

Thank you! :)

[Ma'at]

i like the aggression and the emotion throughout out the poem, really brings out your style
-GS

[Violet Stone]

Thank you very much. I was kind of angry at the time so I'm glad you got the feeling of anger as It was intended :)