Dark Bridge

Poem about mostly loneliness and what awaits in the future. Its also quite dark (not one of my darkest pieces of work) and suggests themes of death. Please read the note for reviewers and enjoy! :)

Dark Bridges

A silent path that leads people on,

The light that was once around you has gone.

It tempts you, beckons you and pulls you in,

Along the path of forbidden sin.

Some vocations are joyous and full of light,

While others are full of greed and devastating might.

This bridge takes you across to the other side,

While in the past, everything has withered and died.

Walking into the awaiting future... you begin to wonder,

Could there be anyone else with this heart of thunder?

But from the start, you were greatly mistaken,

You will always be alone and forever forsaken.

By Violet Stone

Author's Note

Its just something I suddenly had the urge to write and it was completed in the space of 5-10 minutes so sorry if it isn't exactly great. Its also quite short which I apologize for but when I was finished, it didn't feel like I should add to it. But anyway, I hope you enjoy it! :)

This is the first piece of work I have published on here so please give me a review to tell me what you think of it.

Reviews

[Kate Henderson]

I absolutely love this! Your rhyme scheme is very good. I especially like:
"This Bridge takes you across to the other side,
While in the past,everything has withered and died.'
You have a natural poetic style, that's easy to read whilst still being poignant.
Great work! :)

[Violet Stone]

Thank you so much! Its great to hear that you liked it! :)

[John Preston]

very good piece, I liked reading this.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

"You will always be alone and forever forsaken." Tell me about it. :/
Good poem for a dark, dreary night. Like I'm having right now. :)

[Violet Stone]

Thank you very much :3 I'm happy you liked that line, its one of the lines that I was proud of coming up with lol. Also, I hope you're okay :)

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I'm ok. Just looking around for some napkins to wipe away the blood that is pouring out of my stabbed back. :)

[Violet Stone]

Oh snap! :O That doesn't sound good lol. How did you end up with that? :)

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I trusted another human being with my feelings. Not recommended. :/

[Violet Stone]

Its okay, I totally understand all about that kind of thing :)

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
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The only thing I could say to Dark Bridge is this bridge should be called The Nope Bridge

[Violet Stone]

Lol, made me laugh. Thanks for the review :)

[Dark Poet]

Greatly written! I felt like this was me talking it was so real and relatable.

[Violet Stone]

Lol. I'm glad you seemed to like it :)