The Vampire Princess

7 princesses are kidnapped by the evil ware wolf Terro and are in need of rescue. Vampiro's vampire hero Jack must risk his life to save them all.

The Vampire Princess

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter one, getting to know Vampiro

Along time ago there was a galaxy called Vampiro, with five main planets. They were Blood, Vampire, Vamp, Pire and Piro. On one of the five planets was the vampire kingdom where King Zesty and Queen Vanessa had seven girls, Power, Rejoyce, Wisdom, Confadence, Weakness, Sadness and Fear. Wisdom was there favorite. They gave her a tiara that was made of gold with a magical charm shaped like a flying heart. This magic charm was one piece of the powerful force called the bats eye jewel force. The King and Queen never knew how much danger they were putting their daughter in.

Chapter two, meet Jack

A hero, Jack a tan vampire bat, was known as the most famous vampire hero.   Jack fights against the evil ware wolfs that fell under the control of Terro, the biggest ware wolf ever.  These ware wolfs came into the galaxy by a giant heap of stone. The only one who can see Vampiro’s planets are ware wolves, vampires and humans who love vampires. The ware wolves have the second piece of the bats eye jewel force. This one shaped like a lightning bolt with ears. It’s the last piece needed to control the bats eye jewel force. Whoever gets both pieces will rule Vampiro forever. Jack will not let this happen as long as he has princess Wisdom on his side.

Chapter 3, the kidnap

One day while everyone was sleeping all the vampire princesses were transported away from home, at least not Wisdom of course. Jack had a dream Fear came and said, “Help me Jack, me and my sisters have been kidnapped we are all separated on different planets and I am not even in your galaxy right now. I know its morning time, but Terro is planning on kidnapping Wisdom next. Jack, you’re our only hope, the fate of Vampiro rests in your hands. Good luck Jack.” Fear slowly disappears. “Wait, stop, I need more advice!” Jack said. But it was too late, Jack woke up.

Chapter 4 a rescue

Jack ran to his closet and grabbed some clothe. Then he took his sword and shield and ran outside. No vampires were on the streets just ware wolves everywhere. Jack slashed his sword around teleporting the mini ware wolves back to Terro’s hidden layer. Jack jumps into his space ship and takes off heading for planet Blood to find the first stolen princess, Power. Terro waits patiently back on the huge clump of rock for Jack to go away.

Chapter 5 planning

Terro, back on the clump of rocks, was not satisfied with just kidnapping six princesses.  “I want that stupid charm!” Terro screamed. “That snobby girl’s wearing it like its not important! She should give it to me because I would actually use it.”  Terro paced back and forth. A servant came to Terro and said, “That princess can be taken, that pesky Jack is out looking for the others.”

“Thank you for that information!” Terro said. He hops into his space ship ready to strike again.

Chapter 6 in the first palace

On planet Blood Jack has arrived. “It’s kind of hot here.” Jack said. Nearby was a huge castle guarded by two people, a mean nasty creature that is basically a black ware wolf with green eyes. Jack takes his sword out and fights back the peoples. Then once the peoples were sent back to Terro, Jack stepped into the castle door. “Help me!” He heard Power scream. “I’m coming don’t worry.” Jack said. But then he noticed there were three doors. One was open so he walked in to see a hallway with three clumps of snocks, or mini snakes with pig noses. “Shoot,” Says Jack. While he’s away Terro is taken action.

Chapter 7, Wisdom’s disappearance.

Terro teleports to the castle, the guards are sleeping instead of watching so Terro slips on by. Terro continues up the spiral stairs to Wisdom’s room. Wisdom is standing by a mirror combing her hair. Terro bursts down the door. Wisdom shrieks, “Help me Jack! Terro is going to get the bats eye jewel force!” Terro grabs her and takes her away to his secret layer. Jack has no idea what’s happening, but he’s on his way to saving Power from the evil dungeon.

Chapter 8, on my way

Jack defeats the three snocks to get to the door. On the other side was a bridge with five skellys or skeletons. “Whoa!” Said Jack. He carefully walked onto the bridge. When he slashed at one it jumped out of the way, accidentally falling off the bridge. Jack says, “Dumb heads.” He continues making them jump off the bridge. He gets into another room, this time the door closes. Four more skellys fall from the ceiling around Jack and this time there’s no way to push them off. “Shoot!” Jack shouts. He gets his bow and arrow out and says, “Target practice time!”

Chapter 9, a grumpy princess

Jack quickly takes out the skellys and the other door. Jack walks in and this door closed behind him. “Oh my,” Jack shouts as a line of twelve pepoles march toward him.  He twirls his sword and slashes, one disappears. “Ahh,” Jack said. Then he continued, soon all the pepoles disappear. Another door opens, Power is inside. She comes out, Jack grabs her and rushes back threw the palace to the entrance. “You better now?” Jack asked her. “No, you just put your dirty hands on my new dress!” She yells.“Uh, I saved you?” Jack said confused. Power said, “Oh, yah, right, thanks dirty hands. Thanks to you I need a new dress!”

“Thanks to me you’re alive still.” Jack said.“Just take me home!” Power yells.

 

 Chapter 10, Terro’s plan

Jack takes power back to her castle. “Wisdom, I’m back!” Jack said. The king came to Jack and said, “Wisdom’s missing with the bats eye jewel.”

“Oh no!” Jack shouts. Power stomped up stairs to her bedroom. “But if Terro has it, what’s going to happen to us? Wont Terro take over the galaxy?” Said Jack. “Jack its okay, calm down, you can easily get it back. You sure did get Power back quickly.” The king said. “But this is different; the fate of Vampiro is going to be ugly at this point. I mean if those two charms touch and the wrong words are spoken, our galaxy will explode!” Jack answered. “Well we wouldn’t like that, now, would we? Get going!” The king said while pushing Jack out the door.

Chapter 11, Saving Wisdom

Jack hops into the space ship and flies to the meteor where Terro was. Jack hops out and runs to the secret entrance. “Jack help!” Wisdom screams. “Don’t worry Wis, I’m coming to save you.”  Terro was standing by Wisdom who was tied down. He creeps towards her to take her tiara when suddenly, “Whoa!” Jack yelped as he slid into the room. “Well, well, well, look who showed up. Where were you, eating beef jerky?” Terro said. Jack turns into a bat with a mini sword and shield. “Stupid idiot!” Terro said, “What could a bat do to stop me?” Jack glared.

Chapter 12, a job well done

Jack pooped on Terro’s head and it dripped into his eyes. While Terro was temporally blinded, Jack unstrapped Wisdom and started to leave. Wisdom said, “Jack what if we took the other jewel?”

“No time, we will get that later, Fly!” Jack replied. Wisdom said, “Princesses aren’t forced to do things.” Jack shoved beef jerky in her mouth and they escaped. Terro said, “You’ll pay for this Jack!!!”

“Whatever!” Jack yelled back. Now he just needed to find the other princesses.

Chapter 13, a happy Rejoyce

Jack dropped Wisdom off at the castle and went to planet Vampire to find Rejoyce. Jack lands, “It’s pretty cold here,” Said Jack. Up ahead was another palace. Jack took a snack break before he went in. He got inside and a laser beam shot at him. “Wow,” said Jack. Then he dashed past the beam to an open door full of snocks like twenty of them. “Wrong door?” Jack guessed. So Jack went to a different door this one had more laser shooters, six to be exact. Then they leaped of the wall and came close to Jack. “No you won’t!” He said slicing at them. Soon he killed them all, another door opens with Rejoyce in side. She ran out and said, “Thanks Jack, let’s go home.” Jack nods.

Chapter 14, resting

Jack gets home with Rejoyce. Power said, “Well are you buying me a new dress or not?” Jack pushed past her to see Wisdom. “Hey Wisdom, how’s your night going?” Jack asks Wisdom. Wisdom says, “I advise you get some rest before rescuing Confadence. You will find her on planet Piro.”

“Thanks Wis, I will take your advice, but I’m afraid I won’t be able to make it home, so can I just stay here? Please?” Jack asks her. “Sure, why not? We have enough bedrooms here for you to use one.” Wisdom says. Power makes a disgusted face in the background. “Thanks, I do appreciate it.” Jack replied. Power looks like she’s going to puke. “Whatever.” Wisdom says. Power screams.

Chapter 15, confidence for Confadence

The next night Jack flew to planet Piro to find Confadence. It was a lot of work, there was spider webs, lose cords, creaky boards and ghosts everywhere, but with some success Jack Saved Confadence from the evil trap. Now down to Weakness, Sadness and Fear who wait patiently to be rescued by the vampire hero. Jack, all proud of himself, was sure he could finish the job going to planet Pire for two and Earth for the final princess, Fear. Wisdom, however, was just having fun with a young girl who was named after her sister Fear. They chat, talk about how their lives are different and admire the bats eye jewel force piece. With a promise, Little Fear would be there for princess Wisdom if anything was to go wrong with her plan.

Chapter 16, Double trouble

Now Jacks traveling to planet Pire to save two princesses at one time. He steps over to the door and opens it. Cautiously he sneaks by two sleeping ware wolf soldiers into the next room. This one was supposed to be a maze, but Jack flew right over it. Through the door was two passage ways. He goes through one and finds a giant crab sunbathing. “Wrong way again?” Jack asks. The crab nods and escorts him to the next passage way.  “Uh, thanks?” He says. In this room the two princesses were tied to a wall. Jack steps over and falls through the floor. He pulls himself out and flies back over to them. Then he simply chews the ropes off them, grabbing them so they don’t fall into the hole. Now Jack leads two crying princesses back home.

Chapter 17, last but not least

Six down one to go, Jack must go to Earth to reach Fear. The last palace has everything, giant crabs, ware wolf soldiers, peoples, snocks, laser shooters and skellys. Jack works long and hard fighting. The giant crabs paid him no attention, so in turn, he didn’t touch them. Finally the door was within reach.  Jack opens the door and lets Fear out. Then Jack and Fear rush back to the spaceship and leave Earth just before the sun rose, landing carefully back in Vampiro. “Jack I’m scared!” Fear said. Her little eyes bulging. Jack patted her back and led her into the castle.

Chapter 18, red button

Back at the castle…

Wisdom runs down the stairs to greet Jack. “Oh, Jack, I’m glad you’re okay. Listen Jack come with me to Terro’s place now that we have time to get the other jewel piece.”

“Sure let’s go!” Jack said.

At the secret hide out of Terro…

The two teenage bats slip down the stairway to Terro’s layer. Terro says, “Well, well, well, look who came back.”

“Shut up stink dog,” Jack said. Then Wisdom crept towards the piece, but Jack said, “Oooh! What does this big red button do?”

“No! Don’t do it Jack!” Wisdom pleaded. Jack pressed the button. “Whoopsy!” Jack yelled. Then Wisdom grabbed Jack and they rushed out of there. Later the hideout explodes. “Jack!! Why would you do that?!” Wisdom yelled. Jack just sat there with sword and shield looking as if he could cry.

Chapter 19, a fire

Once every twenty years the five planets separate letting the sun directly hit planet Vamp, it is the hottest day ever. Tragedy strikes, a fire started somewhere nearby. Jack wakes up and sniffs the air. Then suddenly he jerks awake. “Princess!” He shouted, “Wisdom wake up! Fire! Fire!” The princesses wake up and rush to Jack’s side. Zesty and Vanessa are the next ones in. “Clear the village Jack! Quickly!” Shouts the Queen. Jack rushes out while the royal family evacuates. Jack brings several families onto spaceships and away from the fire. Wisdom quickly gives the bats eye jewel piece to Little Fear. Jack quickly returns to the princesses.

Chapter 20, Jack’s gone

“Wait!” Jack yells, “One of the kids is missing! I must find them!” Then he hurries away. The fire rapidly gets bigger. Queen Vanessa says, “Come on, let’s leave for awhile.” Wisdom says, “What about Jack, Where is he? He hasn’t returned.” Power interrupts and says, “What about the new dress he owes me?” King Zesty says, “I’m sorry Wisdom, I sense that Jack can’t be with us anymore.” Wisdom is in tears. “He risked his life for a child,” She sputtered. The fire soon dies off, but the vampire princesses have disappeared and are…*

To be continued   

*I purposely cut off mid sentence.

 

 

Author's Note

I made the end purposely cut off. Ignore grammar problems