Good night, Suicide

Good night, Suicide

A Poem by Savior knowmore

Life was hard, and friends became enemies

But you were always there, promising a better time

More than once, I was tempted to take your offer

But when I refused, you didn’t force it upon me

You said the choice was mine to make

But looking back, I wish it hadn’t been

Now those closest blame themselves

Because of your lies, they are scared and hurting

But after I made the choice to take your offer

You left me, Suicide, and went to them

I shout and yell, but they only hear your lies

Telling them it was their fault I’m gone

And I wanted them to make this deal

I shout and scream, pounding against the doors of reality

Coming to them in their dreams

But you twist them, turning them into nightmares

And soon enough, they agree too

All but one agrees to go with you

The one who looks like me

She listens, is sometimes tempted,

And more than once, tries to agree

But she never goes with you

Instead, she says to you, Goodnight, Suicide

And you turn her dreams into nightmares

But every time, she says Goodnight, Suicide

She only gets stronger, for in those nightmares

I can talk to her, for our time together

Had been a nightmare, making this a dream

So, friend, she’ll whisper once more

Goodnight, Suicide

© 2011 Savior knowmore


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i enjoyed it, i just been through 3 suicides last month in the same month, know somewhat wat u mean

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A story of truth or speculation, I still know it well. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Truely Amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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