Acrostic poem #001

Dark colored stars fill the void

Expanding beyond my reach

Supior in every way

Pulsing gently with limitless power

Angry shades of red and gold

Imagine all that power belonging to you

Remove all of reality from life

 

Agressivly fighting the mental bonds they have on me

Nervous glances show fear in their eyes

Doctors seeked to create a monster; they succeeded

 

Darkness envolopes my new world

Infesting the minds of those weak and pathetic

Every soul will be mine.

Author's Note

ignore spelling and grammer.

Reviews

[Alexandria Reece]

This piece seems incredibly deep, I feel as though it is a well I am peering down and cannot see the bottom only assume the mysterious depth (I cannot help but see stars in the would-be void, as you vividly painted them for me in your poem). I love all of the dark imagery and how it all fits together in shaded chaotic madness, I can feel the bottomless appetite for power by the end when the last line almost silently confirms that it is indeed the crux.

[MmeCorpse]

Very, very nice. Is this your first time writing an acrostic? If so, well done.