Demo #001

Alright, "Demos" are short story's I sometimes write. Depending on the content and how much the people who read it likes it, I'll expand on the idea. No two Demo stories are the same.

I am Adam, and I am Lilith. I am Eve, and I am the snake. I am a Nazi, and I am a Jew. I was the begining, and I will be the end. I am everything.

 

 

God claimed to create everything, though he didn't always go by that name. Some times he was a great egg, or some other crazy name. But to me, he was always Valdus. The baby.... My baby. Or at least, one of them. Valdus was my youngest. Than was my oldest. Then came Vega and Widjan, my twin daughters.

 

Than, my handsome first son. His tall, narrow build and leathery skin gave him an odd look. Vega and Widjan, complete opposites of one another. Vega was tall, quiet, reserved. Widjan was shorter, loud, and outgoing. Then... I had Valdus. He was nothing like his brother or sisters. His potential was much less; it pains me still to know how weak Valdus was compared to them.

 

He became so angry, when he realised he was so weak compared to the others. He stormed off, and began to use what power he had to create his own world. His heavenly guards, much more devirse than any one text says. Angels of all kinds obey him. But then, one of them realised Valdus wasn't who he claimed to be. He hadn't created everything. He had only created them, and that world. Valdus' reaction was to throw that angel, Lucifer, into the deepest pits of hell.

 

I silently went to that fallen angel. I tore through Valdus' weak world, entering hell easily. The angel was not evil, not in the least! Valdus only threw him in here to hide his secret. So I made a promise to that poor angel, who only wanted to know why his father had lied. I promised that if Valdus created man and all the good in the world, I would create the monsters.

 

But... We quickly realised that when Valdus' favorite creations died, they went to heaven or hell, my creation had no place to go. I created a place known as Purgatory. Every monster's soul would go there. Than accepted my offer, as he was Death, the one who made sure monsters and people died.

 

It was very elaborate. Sometime's monsters killed humans, or human's killed monsters. Than's personal assistants, Clotho, Lachesis and, Atropos determined when and how everything died. Than would touch them at the time of their death, then his workers, Reapers, would guide them to where they belonged. Once each got to their place, they became subject to that place's ruler's command. Lucifer's assistant, Lilith, was ruler of hell. Valdus and his angels ruled heaven. I controled Purgatory. Valdus didn't question it solely because me and Than were in the mix, both of us a hundred times more powerful than him.

 

Well, the trouble began on the day when an angel, a monster and a human locked Valdus and Than so deep into Purgatory, even i couldn't get them out.

Reviews

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Just one thing to say. You shouldn't uses "Than" as a name. It's a word, and it gets REALLY confusing. I was starting to correct bad grammar and then I realize it's a name. I'd say find a different name because I'm sure a lot of people are gonna get confused exactly like I did.