Forget-Me-Not

Broken rainbows,
heart shaped knots.
drowning in a sea,
of forget-me-nots.

skeleton leaves,
rabid thoughts.
and the always beautiful,
forget-me-not.

shattered clouds,
sweating palms.
clutching tight,
to the forget-me-not.

Frozen trees,
a souls qualms.
floating in the scent,
of the forget-me-not.

Reviews

[Luke Sampson]

This made my heart smile =] I love how the first line of each stanza is ridged or unchangeable, and every line to follow submits to the voice 'of the forget-me-not' (I appreciate how you, I don't know, personified? It in the last 2 stanzas). But what I liked the most, was that it looked simple, but it wasn't =]

[Everett DeValle]

Wonderful...I felt the flow of your poem.

[K.C. Zbryk]

the depth of brevity is captured here perfectly and the images that you paint with this descriptive poem leave the reader wanting more. Very well penned.

[An owl on the moon]

There was such a melancholy music flowing through memory's mindscape here. Vibrant images come to life as if in a darkened dream. Amazing...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very free flowing joy to read poem, great write :)

[prodicallife]

Dewella
what an easy and free flow writting just like a cool breeze. Beautifull i loved it.

Keep writting

Regards
PRODICAL

[deeps]

enjoyed this, I really liked the 2nd stanza.
So very nicely done.