Alpha

Alpha

A Poem by Dewella~Vintella
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A poem in alphabetical order. Ugh.

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Another bridge,
cunning defense,
entering fear.

Fortunate guns,
hillside illusions,
juggling kerosene.

Losing momentum,
no opposition,
painful quiet.

Radical survivors,
turning under,
various war-fields.

Xerosis,
yearning.
Zealots


© 2011 Dewella~Vintella


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Wow, I wouldn't even know how to try.

And it seems to have a ring of truth melded into your words.....very well thought out. Bravo

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this piece of writing.The structure is amazing.Keep up the awesome writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very well done :) I wouldnt say yours is less than mine at all. You have a different style of writing than I do therefore the way you compose this will be different. I like this. Some of the lines could put an image in my head :)

I'm glad I'm not the only one thats tried an alphabetical poem :P

~Tyler

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is intriguing. Some startling images here, too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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