Lies

Day fades into darkness once again,

The truth of my existence falls with the light.

Lies begin to burrow under my skin,

Blood drenching my hands as death makes itself clear to my sight.

My world of beauty; once used to be whole,

But as this new life if mine starts to unfold.

I feel the sanity of my excistance losing control,

and these tragedies turning me cold.

For whatever reason I have been given this barren to behold deep in every bone,

I will stand strong; fighting my way through my own destruction to which I own

Reviews

[Legacy]

Vin Rutilia,

Why has this not been reviewed yet???!!!!

You strive for excellence and you meet with this dark place within yourself. Painfully Beautiful cries in black tears of sorrow drip slowly from this write. I feel myself melting into your despair with no way out...

This poem has pulled up knots in my stomach as I have felt this way in more than one occasion in my lifetime.

There are only two spelling/grammatical mistakes as I have found, and I have listed them below.

"But as this new life if mine starts to unfold." IF should be OF?
"excistance" Existence

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

This would make a great entry into Dark Secrets if you have not entered yet. Poetic Infusion Society

[Arsh]

Lies begin to burrow under my skin,
Blood drenching my hands as death makes itself clear to my sight.

and ...

"For whatever reason I have been given this barren to behold deep in every bone,
I will stand strong; fighting my way through my own destruction to which I own"

Whao! Totally Amazing!
Hey, I liked yer writing way, so, if may I ask for how long you've been writing?