Friends.

Glimmering serenity, 

absolute blossoms. 

Wandering down the wonton path. 

Their petals glossed with chattering joy. 

Maddening in their beauty and belief;

They heal with their radiance, 

leaving chaos to fade away with time. 

Magic, like an iridescent cloak that surrounds you. 

They are an ocean of hope that eliminates all that is wicked. 

Sweeping over you with their innocent essence. 

Author's Note

Wrote this a while ago with my cousin Sara, found it the other day scribbled on a scrap piece of paper and figured I would share it with you all.

Reviews

[Saddam]

So beautiful and enchanted. It hold my breath. Great one. I'm enjoy it totally.

[Arsh]

Yeah, so, it's became my honor now to read this beautiful piece. Am thankful to you and "Sara" both. Well, since the day we put the steps forward into the wicked world, we don't know about everything but we always walk on with one thing "Love" and love always sweeps the beauty into many forms for letting the heart know how beautiful is it. Friends're seemed very helpful in most of the cases but it's all on us what kinda friends we've cus, sometimes, it's all friends who put ya into the world of pain. Anyway, great poem.

The theme's very cool for enjoying the depth of the words.

[Dewella~Vintella]

I am glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the wonderful review.

[Arsh]

The pleasure's always mine, but from the world of curiosity, would ya mind, if May I ask, when you penned this poem what were ya thinking on yer creative sharp mind?

[Dewella~Vintella]

Well, I wrote it with my best friend, and our other friend was there as well. It was a good, simple night and I was just thinking how lucky I was to have them there with me, and in my life.

[Arsh]

Yeah, if you've great friends then I happen to learn, life becomes beautiful living n the time runs fast... well, enjoying the day, time with friends's what that always leaves some impact..even makes some memories of the life when we recall the time in present...isn't it?

[Caradoc]

That was beautiful and inspired. I absolutely love this description of what friends are. Everything from line 6 onward is just amazing. Those are my favorite lines of the piece.

As Tyler before me said, great imagery. You always use such interesting turns of phrase. I wish I had half the skill you have with that.

-Cara

[Ezra Kaossed]

Beautiful poem. I really love the imagery in this poem "They are an ocean of hope that eliminates all that is wicked/Sweeping over you with their innocent essence" Very well written. :)