Distressed Heart

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Love is near.

Love is dear.

Love is lost,

 at what cost?

A broken heart 

and a fallen tear.

Losing you

 is my biggest fear...

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Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Wonderfully rendered, Dear Eva.
I love Rhyming Couplets, and you've created a truly masterfully moving full story, filled with emotion and tender sadness in the economy of merely four short verses … the hallmark of excellent poetry. Not many can express so much meaning in twenty-five words.
Beautiful form and presentation … I can tell you took great care, and it shows in my enjoyment and appreciation, as I am sure it will in others'.
Oh, and such a tender, loving picture.

You've left an indelibly poignant touch on my heart with this one … warmest hug of thanks! ⁓ Richard ; )


(I'll leave you to consider [I think] a coupl'a things that will help this beautiful piece be even more-so, keeping it all in cadence, flow, and harmonious beat … make L5, 6, 7 and 8 read:

A broken heart,
a fallen tear.

Losing You …
my biggest fear!

[Eva]

Thank you for your lovely review. I am so glad to hear from you and I am so happy that you enjoyed it! It's always nice to have your work appreciated. As always you have wonderful suggestions, thank you! Warmest Hugs and Regards Eva ;)

[Richard🖌]

Eva,
A poetess with your potential should always be appreciated and revered. ✨

[Eva]

That's very kind of you. I appreciate your kind words!

[Richard🖌]

My most sincere words come from feelings, my kind words come from them, too.
I appreciate yours, too. : )