Sane Inside Insanity

Introduction to the insanity ward hahaha XD

Come one, come all, to this new place,

Just plaster a fake smile onto your face.

Look around and don't be a stranger,

Act like your life isn't in danger.

Grab a chair and come listen,

Try not to let people see your tears glisten.

We have these nice padded walls here,

And everyone understands you crystal clear.

Go ahead and walk around,

And if you want, you can fall screaming to the ground.

People will not stop and stare,

Because life here is completely fair.

Your wrists are bleeding? That's too bad.

Your best friend died? That's so sad.

We will listen to you no matter what.

We can open your mind that you have shut.

See that girl? Her heart was filled with a lot of strife,

So then she decided to pick up the knife.

Turned her bathtub into a pool of red,

But it's okay, because we are in her head.

We dug around and pulled out what we could,

Then stood her upright and called it good.

Or see that guy? Standing in the corner?

His tale might not be good if you're a mourner.

He had this feeling that was under his skin,

So he decided to go ahead and commit a huge sin.

Pulled a gun and fired one shot,

Knowing that Hell would be where he rot.

But his plan failed once again,

By the horrid act of his best friend.

Now he's here, trying to hide,

We think he's just here for the ride.

But people like this are completely fine,

And this is where these people tend to shine.

The poeple here are not crazies,

They just talk to themselves and pick daises.

You can hear a scream? Pay it no heed,

Let them let it out, it's what they need.

You heard a weird thump, is that what you said?

Oh, it's okay, that guy is just hitting his head.

And if you get cold we can give you a great jacket,

But if you wear it, try not to make a racket.

Go ahead and hold yourself tight,

Because you will probably stay like that all night.

In this building is where I would want to be,

If you were here then you'd definitely agree.

Nice white jackets and walls soft to the touch,

To get in here, it doesn't take much.

So, you, sitting out there and looking in,

Would you like to give this place a spin?

Or you could just sit there in vanity,

While poeple in here are sane inside insanity.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Wow.... this is amazing! Possibly one of the best poems I've read in a long while. Possibly the best poem I've read on this site. I adored the nonchalant welcoming guide tone to this poem. It was so casual and brushed off every little thing that people consider so serious and disturbing to be nothing out of the ordinary. It was normal and natural and didn't need to be brought into attention. The rhyme and the rhythm was a wonderful addition to the poem and the tone and the atmosphere... everything is so well put together... it's brilliant. I'm beside myself with respect for you in writing this poem. The positive, nonchalant tones is just... brilliant. Give this place a spin, hell with this introduction to the place I wouldn't hesitate. It's so calm and (again I use this word) nonchalant that it would disturb so many people in society because it goes against all norms and creates its own norm that is within the realm of insanity.... I adore this poem. Seriously. It's the best.

[James Watts]

Most days I feel like I should be institutionalized lol. This was awesome. A fav for sure.

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome insane poem. It's crazy and amazing. :)

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have never been in an institution, but I have talked to people whom have been. You, pretty much and succinctly, stated what they told me about those places. Very well written!

[Miss Coral]

Great rhyming, though the flow could use some work. Some words can be taken out to better it-- overall, a good piece!
Nice job!

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

I flibbin love this!
it kind of made me laugh, and made me want to go there.
hahaha. Greaaat job! xD

[Ruth]

I sometimes think its we that are the sane in an insane world hon! A great poem! xx

[Zana]

this one is tight........wow it blew my mind away :)~

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

Definitely love this!
I have a love for the psych ward & all things insane.
This reminds me of the book impulse [I can't remember who it is by]
Great write!
[going to mah favorites]
-Elissa :D