I awoke in the birch trees; I looked towards a sky covered in
leaves, tall white forest--in an otherwise dangerous world; sanguine.
I felt a motive, to save the life before my eyes, and all that
transcends this--from lost souls.
A rocky cliff village, below…a sea in fury, many ways to sail her,
I fail and rekindle my flame--my fight; find a way of the others, The Ancients;
wind guide me away.
"Bright and beautiful, the birch is a pioneer, courageously taking root and starting anew to revive the landscape where no other would before." - Celtic Meaning of the Birch Tree
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A rocky cliff village can be your refuge but to reach their you need to FIGHT the unpredictable and wild see. Your vision to save the lost souls and ferry them to the other side reflects your crusader personality.. the fantastical land and sea your imagination weaves is nothing else but your solace and this cruel world and its worries we need to overcome. Inspiring piece of work.
~Sophy
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Crusader personality... very interesting, thank you for the review.
A rocky cliff village can be your refuge but to reach their you need to FIGHT the unpredictable and wild see. Your vision to save the lost souls and ferry them to the other side reflects your crusader personality.. the fantastical land and sea your imagination weaves is nothing else but your solace and this cruel world and its worries we need to overcome. Inspiring piece of work.
~Sophy
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Crusader personality... very interesting, thank you for the review.
10 Years Ago
It was pleasant reviewing you :)
Nice you picked out especially this song Bro ;) oh how I enjoy your wisdom, and writings. This one speaks of renewal, creating, understanding, and surreal, reality into one. You do like fantasy with a personal hue, and I can feel that through this one... You dare, to experiment with great visuals. Also you show such a courage, with fear, (weird mix I know) but it's the best mix. Because, there is a difference with intelligent people like yourself, they just choose to fly, (for from this rock it's more safe) instead of jumping into the unknown, (in this case the sea lava) I imagine here. Well I'm rambling, but I enjoyed this... you make me happily ponder, and your excellent ambiguity, is amazing Bro. You talk code language, and I think not even you are aware of it... :) gorgeous piece.
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