Sun of Mine

Time spent, work-wanted met.

                                                                  Sun of Mine       

 

In my sleeping mind I do see, sun filled sky and kids playing. I often wander here, in my sleep. But I cannot live forever in dreams. I am waking up and taken aback to a place where lives are lived through many tracks. I see mine own and am now of heart, body, mind and soul, to make it so. Yet some years ahead may have to be spent, and until that is finished I cannot be free. For ultimately that is what I am and shall work for, for some time yet.

 

The freedom to be, and do as I please; I wish it were as easy as writing down these words, but perhaps, with choices of mine own making, it could be. I believe that is what I wish to do, have had in mind, and can do well enough to earn myself a means. It will be my freedom by way of monetary gain; for doing that which I enjoy, and doing it well. For what is a life without it? Either slave or slave shall be no choices of mine. So shall I be then, in mine own sunshine.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

Unfortunately dreaming is not enough to create a life that is longed for, but it is the catalyst, having hopes and hereafter taking authentic steps further in the direction of making one's internal wishes, one's external reality. I believe it possible, as long as there is meaning and motivation..

Aye! I see a pirate in the making =)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Hah?! A pirate? How would that be? But indeed, I must step towards dreams within this waking life, to bridge the two to a reality I can enjoy.

[Michelle N. H.]

Really, you don't know?.. I-am-baffled. Apparently I remember more of your dreams than you do then.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Hah! I remember now! Alright. xD

[Zilla Z.]

This is beautiful, visions as in dreams, bring the best future in us above... there is always that point of hope, and reality, through them, (that's where we unite). You really "can" live the dream, as long as you believe in it... it can become real. I loved the wordplay with "mine" within some lines you wrote. The emphasis is really set there.

To own things fully, or be master of them, you must indeed have felt once in a life time the total opposite. To be fully aware first is a wise choice, than, to jump into fear, which is not yet a whole part yet to embrace... if it was, fear would be Sunshine, and Shadows, a dialogue of two entities, with both fear, to spread light as darkness... I feel there must be a slave, and an opposite to make things work. Until then, the sun shall shine, in a beautiful monologue. (my thoughts about your beautiful writing).
Thank you immensely.

Zilla :)