Each Line a Time

Each a specific thought, not so much drifting off.

Each Line a Time

 

The giddy-optimistic no-nonsense look in your eye, wiggly arms and dancing legs and extroverted-induced hyper in the veins, to all avail I see.

 

To be lost in my thoughts, as you float outside into them, what does she think? To cut to the chase I believe in myself as you see in me. Though that does not bode well, I still can’t tell whether that be good or bad.

 

My imagination has a harsher reality in times of disarray, and yet still I dream of pretty things which harbor pain all the same.

 

Pin my heart on an hourglass, waiting for all the sand to drop, and as much as I feel, I can’t reciprocate emotions well; and so tear it off.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nyu]

This is written nicely I enjoyed it. As for what it says, It makes me worry, you should not look for my judgments on yourself, for I have told you many times that you are a good person and I think you must know this, why not believe in it too? I am not something worth waiting, only detaching from.Though people make mistakes its hard to deal with what you make. So I am sorry this is your place to live, not mine. You must be happy with yourself and even if I, or anyone else was to think you were a bad person you should be on your own team, always. :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

It's not a matter of you being worth waiting for or not, I am not 'waiting' for you, it is not necessarily relationship I am speaking of, or about. (The picture makes it seem so, but it just suits the poem well, is why I chose it). I just feel, about the things you said, and done. In my way, I interpret them.

[MoriartyMesa]

I enjoyed this but it did have a first and second voice in it that had a contrast, but gave an over all sync of thoughts. Nice job my man.

You are just so wise beyond your years.............































Screw 25 characters................................ :)