Hearken Sestina

I have no words for this, just simply listen to yourself speak it.

A wrathful approach give one such a scornful

Return, and smothered in the negate

Of why simple lies and complexities show?

To many a fool, who must clearly not know

That upon gift, thou shall receive

Karmic flowing of positive and reprieve

 

Silence yourself, don’t do and reprieve

A relax and calm state, saves one scorn

From the mother, the all of things receive

A signal to cleanse and bless you of negativity

Then will you finally, at very last know

Of what beauties the darkness may show

 

Within this most tantalizing show

One learns, one sees and feels the reprieve

Forgiving and saving the self of which you now know

It is an unbalance of things when hearts turn to scornful

Ways, a nonexistent creation is thus made, we call it negate

Inside open eyes, and let positivity of heart be received

 

Loving of this, and quite fond of that, your receptivity

Is it to this, or to that? Why not allow a showing

Of the reality of things, that there be a one and nothing is negate

A breath of fresh illuminating reprieve

Saving face from heart and mind within scorn

Of this surely you now know?

 

It is an interesting belief this ‘knowing’

Of which one implies his eyes actually receive

That which is real and not a scornful

Heart filled with gummy drops of lies showing

Incomplete data emulating reprieve

It is unreal and thus negate

 

This non-there non-here thing negativity

Latched to one so hard, yet so unreal and widely known

A lack thereof, reprieves

You make it so, the kiss received

Bent to knees and shown

Of what truly terrible a lot can do, of scorn

 

It is of the most careful observation of negativity, which by your own two eyes received.

That a flower like that of nothing known shall forever within heart be shown.

And regardless of how many a thorn she bear, scorn-filled a soul she may possess, await us all reprieve.  

Author's Note

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Perhaps you feel that we learn as much from our and others' negativity as we do from positivity. In fact so many remember the repercussions of things gone wrong from the opposite. 'We learn from our mistakes'. Most things we do or/and experience have varying results, little follows a specific, that's the elemental equation of a.. b.. c.. ad infinitum! ' Heart filled with gummy drops of lies showing Incomplete data emulating reprieve ~ It is unreal and thus negate.. ' (think there you could use 'sticky' instead of 'gummy', gentler word) Your thoughts lie cleanly all the 'page', and i congratulate you on your English! (Maybe like your sister, you're a linguist!)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Thank you very much, Emma.

[V. P. Trujillo]

I think with this one Bro, you show us that negativity, can be turned to positivity, to keep it real simple, in my brain, the more you say in your "speak out loud" and listen, the six sentences a.k.a. senses lol *wink from Sis there* the more it get's the real emphasis, of what is truly needed... the message in this utterly good write is, to listen first to yourself, then to breathe it out to the world... to see yourself, objective, and to see yourself in all good as well in bad, to grow to unity...also it gives me the thought of the "assumptions" in general that are easily made and quite soon, while it's a pure self-reflection.... of the whole little universe of yourself.... (I could be way off, with this interpretation, but this was even for me a head-crunchy-cookie) Super well done dear! :) maravilloso!!

- Sis

[V. P. Trujillo]

Yes, you are exactly right. No interpretation, by the way, is a wrong one. All things echo as they are, and are viewed as being, not always as meant.

True that... thanks for grounding me ;) yet again... my opposite :D