You freeze in the morning rain Yet your guts are boiling inside The anger like a sick feeling Impalpable, yet omnipresent Embarked in an all-round hate You make an enemy of everyone Overtaken by the unexpressed Your emotions killing you internally Festering and plaguing you whole Like a widely spread infection
The imagery is befitting to the emotion of anger. There is a mixture of cold and hot causing one to feel terribly ill. The 'freezing in the morning rain' in contrast with 'guts are boiling inside' indicates it well. It is as though the mind is not in control of the body. The disequilibrium is initially too strong to obliterate willfully and instantly. I cannot imagine how short-tempered people appease themselves.
Anger is a secondary term for contempt, to me. it is worse than contempt in my opinion, as anger can be felt against both loved and hated people.
There is a saying i'd like to share, "anger is the feeling that makes your mouth work faster than your mind." The cycle must stop indeed.
The imagery is befitting to the emotion of anger. There is a mixture of cold and hot causing one to feel terribly ill. The 'freezing in the morning rain' in contrast with 'guts are boiling inside' indicates it well. It is as though the mind is not in control of the body. The disequilibrium is initially too strong to obliterate willfully and instantly. I cannot imagine how short-tempered people appease themselves.
Anger is a secondary term for contempt, to me. it is worse than contempt in my opinion, as anger can be felt against both loved and hated people.
There is a saying i'd like to share, "anger is the feeling that makes your mouth work faster than your mind." The cycle must stop indeed.
I'm 26. A native french speaker, I only picked up creative writing and poetry recently. English felt like the best way to describe my feelings so far.
Acrostic might be my favorite genre. more..