The whimsy being

The whimsy being

A Poem by Vin
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Got little autobiographical with this one! But this was fun to write.

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That's the way I'am
for I have no destination 
Life is to be lost
yeah, that I feel the best
All I need is fresh air
and strangers lookin' at me.
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All I see is road 
I could crawl through mud and thorns 
crazy? maybe! Gypsy? YEAH
I wanna dance, and always groove
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Open your heart to me
I will make you ecstatic 
free from past and of future
I'll show you 
the way to live one life! 

Love and dance is all I do
but that raptures world around.
Be utter still or dance supreme,
I know only these two!

© 2019 Vin


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This is life well described. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

No, thank u for reading! I value your reviews.
Lea Sheryn

5 Years Ago

Thank you. You are very kind.
Lea Sheryn

5 Years Ago

Thank you. You are very kind.
You promise ecstasy through dance and love. How can any one say no to that? A wonderful poem filled with vigor and promise of quaint living. You have painted a picture of superb attitude.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank U so much, glad u liked it. Keep reading and writing!
Love
There is a definitely some gypsy in these lines. Movement, not settling. And of course dancing round camp fires. That's where you took me Vin.
I enjoyed where I went and I love to dance like no one's looking :)


Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Always, there will be a gypsy thing- That's involuntary!!
You keep dancing like no one's watc.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I will. Have a loveky day :))
I love the carefree element of just living life to the max and getting out and doing whatever whenever. Just being FREE flowing in the wind. Made me smile and simply enjoy.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

I love that u smiled cos of this. I will try to keep doing that.

LOVE!!

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