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The whimsy being

The whimsy being

A Poem by Vin
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Got little autobiographical with this one! But this was fun to write.

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That's the way I'am
for I have no destination 
Life is to be lost
yeah, that I feel the best
All I need is fresh air
and strangers lookin' at me.
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All I see is road 
I could crawl through mud and thorns 
crazy? maybe! Gypsy? YEAH
I wanna dance, and always groove
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Open your heart to me
I will make you ecstatic 
free from past and of future
I'll show you 
the way to live one life! 

Love and dance is all I do
but that raptures world around.
Be utter still or dance supreme,
I know only these two!

© 2019 Vin


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Li
Yep....just keep going!! Live your life

Posted 5 Years Ago


Life is an unending journey where our destinations keep on changing. Love and dance is the best thing you can do :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


enjoy the revel-ations and always remember to share them it is a mandate of presence dear Vin

Posted 5 Years Ago


The movement portrayed in your writing is tempting, dancing around, being free. I enjoyed this, good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful expression of words. I loved it. thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


If only the world could see through your eyes, think with your mind, what a peaceful place this planet would be. Enjoyed this very much.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is a great way to look at life! I love it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Well this is a fun poem. The words made you seem really excited which was good.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I'm very jealous! First, becuz this is your life & second, becuz you present bright details in such light whimsical terms to SHOW the spontaneous nature you want to convey. This was me in my younger days. I hit the road with total abandon & that's what your poem makes me want to do right now! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


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DAH
This one is like a 21st Century Rumi, with its almost ecstatic flare.

Good job!
DAH

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Woah! I would like to keep this framed and keep as an inspiring thing!

Thank U
DAH

5 Years Ago

My pleasure!

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