More than Love

More than Love

A Poem by Vin

You look the same
neither I'm any different
Then why the entire world
seems to be changing!

Did something go wrong?
Or is it going right?
Are we the only one's,
who is away from both!

Life is constantly moving from day to night
worry-less we are with each other,care-free!
No matter it is here or there
earth or sky, even heaven or hell
we have seen everything with our love! 

It's given pleasure and pain
when we tried to possess each other.
And that was when I learnt 
that love is all about self!
It starts with self, may be triggered by another
but essentially own making!

I traveled with this truth
met so many souls, applied and experimented.
All it gave was immense joy.
And then I returned to 
part the joy and give it to all.

LOVE

© 2019 Vin


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DAH
The wisdom in this poem is highly expressive;
there's much to be praised here;
the undeniable fact that without self-love darkness lurks:

"And that was when I learnt
that love is all about self!
It starts with self" ––– bravo!


Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank U! Wisdom becomes deep when shared. Hope we will converse more on the same.

LOV.. read more
DAH

5 Years Ago

You're welcome, and I'm looking forward to more ...



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Your poem is nicely expressed in an open innocent way, as if the reader is watching the narrator stumble down this road of life & love, discovering while sharing it in words. This reminds me of how many people start out thinking that the other person is supposed to make him/her happy by acting in all the ways we expect. But then we learn to let go & let people be how they are, realizing we need to look within to find some magic to bring to the relationship, instead of judging how well the other person is doing it . . . this is when real loving friendship happens! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


I think this really sweet. Love is joyful when its true, and this makes me think of the joyful love I've gotten to be around. You did a great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank you scarlet. You wrote nice things too.

LOVE
I'm not a poem fan, but I like this ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Wow!! This will keep me going.
Please keep empowering like this.

LOVE
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DAH
The wisdom in this poem is highly expressive;
there's much to be praised here;
the undeniable fact that without self-love darkness lurks:

"And that was when I learnt
that love is all about self!
It starts with self" ––– bravo!


Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank U! Wisdom becomes deep when shared. Hope we will converse more on the same.

LOV.. read more
DAH

5 Years Ago

You're welcome, and I'm looking forward to more ...
Love of self is paramount when it comes to opening the gateway to loving others vin. You have expressed that so well in these lines. That is a message which needs to be shouted loud and clear for people to attain happiness. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

And I wish everyone should learn this. Let love spread.

Thanks for your love
We are enough and to love ourselves is the door to loving others - an impressive exposure of love in all its facets and thanks for sharing its wondrous power Vin

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

And it is true that love is universal, but only when we see our self in every being!
LOVE
This is very true being happy starts with you. I have always struggled with independence, i wish i knew how to make myself happy.
Wonderful very meaningful and realistic poem. I much enjoyed the read

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank U for your words. Do keep reading my space and let me read yours. Looking forward to more conv.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Years Ago

Your very much welcome
Wow, so right we have to love ourselves first then let others in.
Good write

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vin

5 Years Ago

Thank U and as always- much love to you.

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