The night.

You know what's sexy? A real conversation!

I met this girl in a breezy night

and only two of us were in the pretty bight.

Nothing else to do, we settled to talk

and I was impressed by the one wearing a smock.

We started with the question, 'So,what's your Story'

and I must say next few hours were hallucinatory.

I shared my triumphs, heartbreaks and philosophy,

all the time she gazed on my eyes with a curiosity.

Her story was just as sublime as her deep eyes;

and we saw how zippy time flies!

she had battles,joy and sorrow

but went through them to be ready for tomorrow.

There's nothing more tempting than a lively eye,

which tells stories with passion and not intending to pry.

we had a conversation which went beyond normal,

in few hours we shared something as long as a novel.

Here two gypsies were cuddling their worlds

and learning that love can be sweet and bold.

The best thing was coming into terms

that romance and love are entirely different forms.

For an other one looking at the two

it was nothing but love all the way through

Indeed it was so for us, we would say

but wholly in a different divine way

When it was dawn and time to part

she held my hand and touched my heart

told I wanted to do all this physically

but what we had touched my being unlikely

We walked in two different ways

with a love and heart strongly brazed.

If a talk can make us see life like this

how profound a life we can live with nothing but bliss

LOVE...

Author's Note

with love...

Reviews

[ms. understood]

This might just be one of the best poems I have read on this site. My favorite conversations to have are those you go into not expecting much from but leave with a change in thought and good vibrations. This connection is one we all seek in another, whether friendly or romantic. Lovely write, Vin!

[Vin]

Aww!! Thank you so much! Yeah I've had many of 'em. It is amazing how much we have to contribute to each other. Hope we'll also have some.

Good luck!

[Neville]

you hit the nail on the head with your authors note my friend... ya poem was enjoyed too I might add.... N

[Vin]

Thanks N, this is empowering.
You keep writing .
You can also see my blog https://vinajith.blogspot.com/.

Love

[Neville]

my pleasure and thank you for the invite

[Sarah K Cass]

I'm just starting a nose through your writing and have read The Night first. What a jaunty one it is too. A description of connection between two souls, romance of a different kind. Love it.

[Vin]

Thank you Amber. Keep reading. Here's the lonk to my blog https://vinajith.blogspot.com/. Do share your work as well. Looking forward for great conversations.

Love