The night.

You know what's sexy? A real conversation!

I met this girl in a breezy night

and only two of us were in the pretty bight.

Nothing else to do, we settled to talk

and I was impressed by the one wearing a smock.

We started with the question, 'So,what's your Story'

and I must say next few hours were hallucinatory.

I shared my triumphs, heartbreaks and philosophy,

all the time she gazed on my eyes with a curiosity.

Her story was just as sublime as her deep eyes;

and we saw how zippy time flies!

she had battles,joy and sorrow

but went through them to be ready for tomorrow.

There's nothing more tempting than a lively eye,

which tells stories with passion and not intending to pry.

we had a conversation which went beyond normal,

in few hours we shared something as long as a novel.

Here two gypsies were cuddling their worlds

and learning that love can be sweet and bold.

The best thing was coming into terms

that romance and love are entirely different forms.

For an other one looking at the two

it was nothing but love all the way through

Indeed it was so for us, we would say

but wholly in a different divine way

When it was dawn and time to part

she held my hand and touched my heart

told I wanted to do all this physically

but what we had touched my being unlikely

We walked in two different ways

with a love and heart strongly brazed.

If a talk can make us see life like this

how profound a life we can live with nothing but bliss

LOVE...

Author's Note

with love...

Reviews

[ms. understood]

This might just be one of the best poems I have read on this site. My favorite conversations to have are those you go into not expecting much from but leave with a change in thought and good vibrations. This connection is one we all seek in another, whether friendly or romantic. Lovely write, Vin!

[Vin]

Aww!! Thank you so much! Yeah I've had many of 'em. It is amazing how much we have to contribute to each other. Hope we'll also have some.

Good luck!

[barleygirl]

I couldn't agree with you more. Number of folks I've run across with whom I can share such a gift = very few over long years of varied adventurous living. I've always wanted to describe what it's like when two people "click" on a cerebral level, which filters down to being a physical turn-on, but not necessarily one to be pursued in physicality. You not only nailed it, but you drilled down to an amazing level of specificity that's fresh & originally-stated! This is a superb message with mostly solid rhyme & rhythm (tho it could use a bit of pruning to be up to my exacting standards! *wink! wink!*) This is an inspiration to read (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Rhayne]

How time and life are alike, they fly by. Two people meet by attraction, share of their compassions and desires. Unite and learn of love. Then daily life parts them with hearts aflame. If the night before was real, they'll know because all the next day, that night will be all they know.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, Vin.

[Chris Shaw]

Sometimes we meet people we can really connect with. A bit like meeting a soul mate and then the moment passes. Conversation is so important in making that connection. That, 's what you gave me when I read your lines vin.

First stanza, second line, I wasn't sure about the meaning.

Chris

[Karmee]

This is so wonderful and so beautiful, I really enjoyed this write

[Vin]

Thank u and love to you!

[serendipity]

This was so beautiful! The poem was a fountain of overwhelming emotions that were certain to touch anyone's heart. Every line was so philosophical and alluring!

[Vin]

And dear the fountain is from your heart. I can feel the love. Keep empowering!!

[Fran Marie]

Sounds like a beautifully spent evening with that special someone..sweet and romantic..love is like that ..special and divine..
nicely penned in expressive verse..

[Vin]

true!! and life is all abt creating such magic

[Digvijay Singh]

This is so amazing to read. Thank you for posting this Vin

[Vin]

Pleasure's all mine dear friend:)