Ruin

Scorching hot this summer day, 
Feeling colder then frigid ice, 
Long laced words pierce your heart, 
Feeling not the sweat on your brow, 
Daggers of frost stab your chest making you shiver Violently then weep, 
Tossing back your head you laugh with mixed emotions... 
Love, so many had said, would ruin you, and you paid them No heed...

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is very good. I really think it was done well. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Greg Skura]

I truly enjoyed your poem! In the depth of ruin, everything is colder.
Thank you for sharing! (p.s. spell check)

[linalove]

i like your posts. (: