Grey Tide

the gray tide began to rise 
upon the golden shore. 
cold and damp 
she sat 
watching the gray 
mingle with the shimmering sand 
clouds heavy with rain 
burst and fell 
she hung her head, 
closing her eyes. 
so numb with cold 
she collapsed 
lying upon 
gold dust 
she gleamed softly 
as the sun shone through 
dark clouds 
her eyes opened briefly 
to see the sun 
illuminate the dark 
she smiled 

Reviews

[misha]

This was amazing, such vivid wording, it was just flawless. Great job!