Broken Strings in Love

A catchy thought.

Empty Note.

Untidy memories.

Messy dreams.

Crying face.

Broken & collapsed relationship.

All those you left for me.

You blamed me - you cursed me.

I hope you stay happy forever.

I believe you had worst time with me.

I tried to make you happy - when you were left alone.

I hope you at least think once as, I'm going through those same phase.

At that time I was there.

To hold you.

To give you my shoulder to cry.

To hug you tight and I was the one who told you “don't worry I'll be there with you forever”.

I hope you miss too that statement, I meant them as a friend.

You took it as relation.

I was supporting you, when I starting falling for you it was instant.

Your kisses, Our fights.

Our night together holding each other together tight.

Making fun, laughing out loud.

Was that all - Friends for benefits?

I never felt bad, now I'm emotionally down.

I apologies, I'm human, I've been - I loved a person who never loved me in return.

 

Still I say - God Bless you.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Sad but beautiful in wishes and emotions. Very touching, mate....:)))))

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is nicely done, Vikz.
The ending line shows a forgiving heart.
Great!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Dhaye

[poetdoug]

You have a wonderful way of speaking directly from you soul and putting it into words.
Very impressive work my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Poetdoug...

[Sami Khalil]

You write beautifully and wonderfully. Keep it up. Excellent...:)...

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Happy hours]

nice write ...........well done :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Anshul :)

[Virtuosa X]

Nice work! I enjoyed this very much

Keep it up

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Virtuosa..