Devoid Love

Implore for clemency, he replies it

Beg for life, he replies it

Pray for aroha, he asks you to share a little

Pray for nowadays, you get it hereafter.

Once your acted, wait for your call on,

It comes back - like boomerang

God Says - Love thy impoverished

His/Her smiles would pay your cost

Love thy one 

Love thy two

Love thy hundred 

Love thy million

It makes you love thy Creator God;

Love thy begetter

Love thy mother

Love thy weans

He will requite the prefer - He will love you in requite

Love thy poor - He loves you forever and a day.

Reviews

[bookworm0812]

This makes people really think about the way to look at God, and what has to be done to make a connection. Everything and everyone, every little action, can be a way to make a higher connection, and this really shows that. It was very powerful, and it sparks the senses a lot. I can relate to it in my own trying to connect with God, when I try. Having patience and connecting to everyone and making everything into an example of what you can do to get closer to God is a good way to look at things.

[cycy]

very interesting poem dear, well written indeed

[Durga roy]

Beautiful poem..like it. :)
Its really feels great when someone is happy and the reason behind it is You.
And it reminded me a line that once i read is-" The good u do come back to you, and the bad u do remains with u.":)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for your review Durga :)

Much appreciated.

Will check your work and review few sooner.

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

Love thy begetter
Love thy mother
Love thy weans
He will requite the prefer - He will love you in requite
Love thy poor - He loves you forever and a day.

such lovely lines....triggers my emotions. If you find thyself in other's happiness then that would be the most beautiful way of living :) thank you for sharing :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks for stopping and reviewing this poem Vani :)

Much appreciated and will check your work sooner ;)

- Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Love thy neighbor as thyself. I think that's the Christian message. You wouldn't know that by watching these dip s***s claiming to be Christians around here. It's no wonder I don't believe.

[Vikrantsingh]

Lol, I'm not Christian but yes I got this line while rhyming.

Thanks for your review and acknowledgement.

Much appreciated :)

[Quill~]

When we love, it does come back, like a "boomerang", ten fold.
A wonderful poem! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Quill for your time and respond on this poem.

Much appreciated. Will check your poem sooner and will leave some comments as well.

[Ruth]

Beautiful! A lovely reminder to focus on universal aspects and not the self, wonderful x

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Poppy xxx.. will drop by your work and will comment sooner.