Sipping joe (Coffee)

Dark Fantasy .......

Holding coffee mug during freezing night,

I'm thinking about you, 

All day and night.

You're my imagination 

You are my life

Thinking about future

By holding you close and tight 

Every single sight

Its all Black as you in night 

Sipping every single drop 

Of you; reminds me 

Of her every time

You oftentimes taste like her

When I'm done

I feel, I need it more

You're simple, you're black,

I'm addicted to you till death

As I scream out loud.

You taste little bitter

You taste little alright

Your smooth as offense

I would rather choose you over every time.

Author's Note

Need your review.

Reviews

[Jay Steitler]

I am all about the coffee, private little cafes(when I can find them), and coffee culture. There is nothing better than a mug on a cold day, save for the fact the slightest room draft, can make it unacceptably cool, and quickly! As suggested by this poem, I too associate coffee with a woman. Sadly, she is on the brink of madness. So it is an association I do not relish. Excellent read, fellow poet!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Jay :)
Really appreciate your visit ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I like the choice of words and honest tone of this poem. Your descriptive words made me smell the essence of coffee.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you dear, much appreciate your review

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a great ode to coffee! So romantically charged.....I liked it a lot. Lydi**

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you for your visit Lydia :)

[Ahena MK]

I feel, I need it more
You're simple, you're black,
I'm addicted to you till death

!!!!

really really really good

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Ahena :)

[cycy]

hhhhmmmmmm...coffee you say?? loool

[Vikrantsingh]

Yeah Coffee - I love it ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks for reviewing it :D

[cycy]

it's a lovely poem hey. i enjoyed reading it, leaves you wondering if it's just about coffee or there is more to it than meets the eye, a bit naughty too ;) well written and nope, coffee is definitely not a vitamin, my 3rd grade teacher would have a fit if she saw that...lolest

[Vikrantsingh]

Lmao :P True this has mixture of my many moods coffee - love and ex. Well all this has been mixed under this and I wrote this poetry.

Well your teacher didn't like this - Ah! I hope she should read my other poems too :P

Cheers!
Singh :)