Broken Chords Of My Heart

An Attempt to write Broken Heart Poetry :P

Relation was made to de-escalated

Then why you embroiled me in

I hope you did that to share your anguish

Indeed it worked fine

Now you're happy in your life

You left me weeping, weakened & spited

Strings of my heart you touched & cozen

In relationship which we partook

I hope to call you back

But it’s already tardy

You went with my felicitousness

I got all your anguish in retort.

 

Grab a plate and throw it on the ground

- Okay, done.

Did it break?

-Yes.

Now say sorry to it.

- Sorry.

Did it go back to the way it was before?

- No

Do you understand?

Author's Note

Please Improve if you get some mistakes ;) its just my attempt :)

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

I see immense amount of poet-ism overflowing from this poem. And that is saying something, when only 2 months ago, I read a poem of yours which made you sound novice.

How well you have used modern poetry and lived it! Remarkable indeed! Congratulations!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Shivam, Yes WC really helped me to work on my weaker part where I use to feel difficulty while expressing myself. Now, i'm still learning more and more.
Thank you and Smilespm to always help me :)
- Singh ;)

[Shivam Murari]

Indeed. This place has improved my writing skills a lot, either!

[Vikrantsingh]

;) We learned many things and still under process to get more to share in coming days :)
- Singh :)

[Shivam Murari]

Many indeed : )

[Sami Khalil]

"Now you're happy in your life

You left me weeping, weakened & spited

Strings of my heart you touched & cozen

In relationship which we partook"
I was heart-broken reading this sad but powerful write. I like a lot that example you gave at the end...Always look forward to read your work...Splendid...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...A nice pic of you ...:)

[Jack...]

Wow, this was so very deep and sad, but coming around to the end, what a display of genius. What a way to see it. My friend, you have outdone yourself this time. I just adore the broken plate analogy. All should read this who experience such pain.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you ^-^ Jack really appreciate your review and I'm happy you loved it :)
- Singh :)