Broken Chords Of My Heart

An Attempt to write Broken Heart Poetry :P

Relation was made to de-escalated

Then why you embroiled me in

I hope you did that to share your anguish

Indeed it worked fine

Now you're happy in your life

You left me weeping, weakened & spited

Strings of my heart you touched & cozen

In relationship which we partook

I hope to call you back

But it’s already tardy

You went with my felicitousness

I got all your anguish in retort.

 

Grab a plate and throw it on the ground

- Okay, done.

Did it break?

-Yes.

Now say sorry to it.

- Sorry.

Did it go back to the way it was before?

- No

Do you understand?

Author's Note

Please Improve if you get some mistakes ;) its just my attempt :)

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

I see immense amount of poet-ism overflowing from this poem. And that is saying something, when only 2 months ago, I read a poem of yours which made you sound novice.

How well you have used modern poetry and lived it! Remarkable indeed! Congratulations!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Shivam, Yes WC really helped me to work on my weaker part where I use to feel difficulty while expressing myself. Now, i'm still learning more and more.
Thank you and Smilespm to always help me :)
- Singh ;)

[Shivam Murari]

Indeed. This place has improved my writing skills a lot, either!

[Vikrantsingh]

;) We learned many things and still under process to get more to share in coming days :)
- Singh :)

[Shivam Murari]

Many indeed : )

[Traci]

You just keep getting better and better sweet Singh. The emotion portrayed in this piece flows beautifully as do your words.

"Grab a plate and throw it on the ground
- Okay, done.
Did it break?
-Yes.
Now say sorry to it.
- Sorry.
Did it go back to the way it was before?
- No
Do you understand?"

Such thought provoking lines. The dialogue really brought this piece to life. Well done my friend.
BTW, love the new pic...handsome :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Awww.. thank for the compliment Traci ;) and i'm pleased you really loved my poem ;)
Thank you for visiting my page and for sucha wonderful review :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

"Grab a plate and throw it on the ground
- Okay, done.
Did it break?
-Yes.
Now say sorry to it.
- Sorry.
Did it go back to the way it was before?
- No
Do you understand?"

Wow so poignant and thought provoking.. Sorry cannot fix everything it is only words.. A heart that is broken needs a surgeon to fix it, an act of god perhaps.. Sorry cannot mend a broken heart.. only time and love and then only sometimes.. Loved this Vik.. xoxo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks Rose, as always you keep boosting me always with your inspiration and help :)
much appreciated :)
Singh :) xxxx

[shallimarRose]

you are most welcome my friend.. xo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :)

[NebraskaHope]

nice poem, I loved the quote that you used at the end !

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much my friend. Im so much pleased with your visit and your kind review.
- Singh :)

[Ruth]

This is superb...emotions are raw here and yet gentle, always enjoy reading you hon x

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much PoppySilver for you review and visit :)
your review cheer me up :)
Singh xxx

[Rhiti Bose]

Singh, the first part of the poem is fine, but the real brilliant touch is in the second part. I absolutely loved how you included the dialogues into the poem.

Grab a plate and throw it on the ground
- Okay, done.
Did it break?
-Yes.
Now say sorry to it.
- Sorry.
Did it go back to the way it was before?
- No
Do you understand?

amazing, good work.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Titan]

Grab a plate and throw it on the ground
- Okay, done.
Did it break?
-Yes.
Now say sorry to it.
- Sorry.
Did it go back to the way it was before?
- No
Do you understand?

Amazing one my friend

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Amazing read and write my friend

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

Wonderful I loved the idea behind this Good Work

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for reviewing and visiting my page :)
- Singh :)