Truly Deeply Madly - In Love

Dedicated to my Daughter - Aashi

Those exposited eyes

Those adorable lips

Flyspeck nose

That bundle grins

Ah! I'm dying to see you walking

Towards me

& One day you move towards me

And you give tongue to - "Dad look what I got for you"

I bend to see it élan

It’s my name she wrote

With broken letter

This made me cry & smile

I nested her so hard & kissed her

She said - "dad I love you"

I kept mum and hoped-for it to dissolve

Till my heart stop beating

I felt them pertaining my soul

I said love you - my love

Author's Note

Feelings I shared :) I hope you will love it :)

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

"Ah they come to us like the snowflakes that shower us so beautifully in the wintry skies as they blossom in the flowery garden that we watch their lives grow so beautifully and majestically. A magic of which we can't even explain there lies a universal truth to us - that our children will grow and be magnetically attracted to our love that we shower them so madly. For what is love given to a child is nothing short of what we give to make sure they make our lives an experience of which will never be exchanged for anything in this world."

My friend, I don't have a child right now but growing up I learned to take care of my siblings and watching them while my parents worked was quite rewarding. Even then when I did my volunteering days I often was with a community of single parents mostly women who have their own children and I acted as their big brother throughout those days. It was a heartwarming experience I tell you. To what I will expect when I have a child of my own biological or not the words of what I begin to say about them is something even I can't fully express of my own.

Wonderfully penned Singh. Have a great day my friend :)
Zero :)

PS: My second book is coming soon so get ready to get a copy of it in your computer ;) You'll definitely love and laugh on this one :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much mate for your time and your review :) much appreciated :)
Sure just share me the link from where i can download/purchase?
I don't think this book will be available in India. So i have to download it.
Probably you have to send me the ebook :D
- Singh :)
Stay Blessed :)

[Zero_Edge88]

You're very welcome my friend! :) No problem it was lovely reading it definitely heartwarming for sure! :)
I shall when it's ready and I'll make sure it's available in India. I thought I had Amazon made it available everywhere but I will check it definitely :)
Well the link will get you the ebook so definitely :D
~Zero :)
As to you as well my dear friend :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks bro cheers!

[Marie]

hat's very sweet...you share your feelings well...

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Marie :)
Yes its my feeling and thought which I imagine she will do once she grow up beautiful and young daddy's girl :D

[Cody Williams]

Very touching! Very nice.

-CW

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for your review CW :)
Have a blessed weekday's and weekend :)
- Singh :)

[Karen]

This is a touching poem to your daughter. As a parent myself, I often find that my children are inspiration for my poetry, and I hope that when they're older they realize how much I loved them all their lives through my words, more immortalized than just words stated every day. I can even relate to crying and smiling because of my children. Beautiful poem!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Karen, You have travelled a long journey with your kids and life :)
- Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

So lovely.........I'm in love with this beautiful writing. Dad is the real HERO in my life........:)
Thanking you is not enough. Wonderful and splendid:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Vani :)
Yes indeed Father's are real hero :)
Yuppie :D I'm the one.read moreThank you so much Vani :)
Yes indeed Father's are real hero :)
Yuppie :D I'm the one.
-Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

:) You are a real hero ........

[Vikrantsingh]

Awwww that was flattering ^ - ^

[Sami Khalil]

A great and lovely poem . She is blessed to have a loving and caring dad with a great heart...Splendid...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much, Thank for your blessings :) God Bless you my friend ;)
- Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

You too my friend...Namaste...:)

[Ruth]

Deeply moving, I was a daddy's girl lol So I understand this poem a lot, beautiful! xx

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much PoppySilver :)
Thank you so much for your visit :)
- Singh :)

[Ruth]

Most welcome! x

[Rhiti Bose]

I can feel your poem deeply, as am a mother to a daughter too. Your love for her is so beautifully expressed. Wonderful.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Rhiti. Yes, that so pure and unexpressed feeling you have when she catches your finger Ah! I keep whispering I love you more than yesterday - Sweetheart :)

[Prritiy]

Its so beautiful and touching. Poem too written nicely, liked it :)

Blessings for your daughter.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Prritiy. Stay Blessed :)
- Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Jack...]

So very touching and beautiful my friend. being the father to two girls, I remember these early days and waiting for those first steps, the first words and the excitement that followed each new goal. My girls are both grown, but I still feel that way. Very nice my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Awww... thank you so much Jack.. I really love the way you expressed your memories :)
Yes indeed, Girls are the best thing which could ever happen to his father :)
I'm enjoying it every day and every breath of it :)

- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

a beautiful loving write and they grow up so fast...an exciting time when they begin to walk and then they run and you will be running after her ha....keeping up with her...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you Rose :) Yes that really amazing time. I'm enjoying every single time spend with her :)
read moreThank you Rose :) Yes that really amazing time. I'm enjoying every single time spend with her :)
- Singh :)