Wonderment

Love to my Life & My Wife

Life was childlike

Love made it perplexed still gratifying

Travelled fleetly but not in your absence

It is lofty

It is burnished

Adhere to me today

Leave me for noone

I'm your & you be mine

I loved it the way 

You aforementioned it twice

You love me & I responded

I love you too

Since, then

I want to olfactory perception you tegument

I want to olfactory perception you hair

I want to gustatory sensation your lips

You are almightiness

You are my wifey

You varied my life

Author's Note

Just Be True :) & Review :)

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a nice love poem, Singh.. so sweet to write this for your wife.. I did have some troubles with these lines:

I want to olfactory perception you tegument --what is tegument? and why not just say "smell"?
I want to olfactory perception you hair -- again, just say "smell"
I want to gustatory sensation your lips -- why not say "taste"?
You are almightiness -- do you mean divine?

Those lines sound so technical, it reads like a medical journal instead of a love poem.. Hope you don't mind the questions and suggestions.

[Vikrantsingh]

:P I was trying something new here ;) If i won't use those glossy words.. which you mentioned technical :P this would sound again monotonous and not that fresh ;)
I hope you got what I mean to say ;)
Singh :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I understand wanting to do something new and fresh.. I just think there are other ways.. like showing a smell or a taste instead of using medical terminology.. but hey, your poem, dear and I do understand what you are saying.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :D

[Vani Jalagar]

I loved it.....really very awesome...specially the following line touched my heart.
"I'm your & you be mine
I loved it the way
You aforementioned it twice
You love me & I responded
I love you too"
it is very closely related to me.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Vani :)
;)
- Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

You're getting good at the Romantic odes. Great Job

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much BR ;)
- Singh :)

[Astro]

Again you show a wonderful appreciation for your wife, and true love will definitely change a persons outlook on life. Great points. Some of those terms are pretty unorthodox and grammatically off, but the sentiments are there and understandable so, knowing you like to try out different terms that are a bit unique, I think your style shines in this one Singh. ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Astro ;) Much Appreciated your review :D
- Singh :)

[Astro]

You're welcome Singh.

[Zero_Edge88]

I have to admit you got me going there with your big word usages right there haha. Olfactory and gustatory, wow, you making me blush in there. Reminding me of my nursing days there my friend! Sarcasm aside.

Such beauty though is indeed truly powerful and provocative in the words we say it and how you want to let her know you are there for her. For words means so many things, concepts and beauty as they also construct an image like no other. This is what it means to truly love someone. To know they are connected and touched is one that is easily remembered. However to know not only they are on their mind but also in their soul that one is simply one cannot begin to explain so easily! Magnificently penned Singh!

Have a great day my friend and enjoy your weekend but most importantly enjoy life especially with that wonderful muse of yours also known as your wife! :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow :) Thank you so much Zero :) Love your reviews always on my page always :)
- Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

You're welcome Singh and you know it :) :) I love seeing that wonderful smile of yours more on the page! It's a comfort and relief for sure! :)
Have a beautiful week my friend and take care
~Zero :)

[poetdoug]

Thanks for raising the banner for us husbands to write to our wives. I try to do a special poem for my wife's and I Wedding anniversary each year. This gives me some more 'grist' for my mill'!lol
Stellar work my friend!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Poetdoug :) that's amazing you could write poem for your love every year that shows how much you love her every single moment in your life :)
Stay Blessed :)
- Singh :)

[poetdoug]

Thank you Singh my friend

[Jack...]

Oh my, and they call me the romantic poet. My word, this was beautiful, soft, touching, anything and everything that is love. So very nicely done my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Jack :) Much Appreciate your visit on my page :)
- Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. A great tribute to the love of your life and more. Well written and fabulous...Pen on...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Much Appreciate your visit Sami :) Have a blessed day :)
- Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

You too dear friend...You are welcome...:)

[Mark]

Olfactory perception? Very sweet and funny.

[Vikrantsingh]

Hehehehehe Mark was trying something new :P
I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
- Singh :)
Happy weekend :)

[SyberRose]

Written like a man in love with his beautiful wife...i think you mean none for noone....a small edit thereI

WANT TO SMELL YOUR HAIR instead of the below
I want to olfactory perception you hair

i WANT TO TASTE THE SENSATION OF YOUR LIPS
I want to gustatory sensation your lips

You are almightiness...BUT I think you mean divine instead of almightiness.
You are my wife
You complete my life

Hope you don't mind me editing for you Singh...a beautiful poem...Rose

I'm not sure what this line meant?I want to olfactory perception you tegument?????

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure, Rose - got'cha ;)
Will alter it later :)
Thank You So Much for review :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

I added another line in case you didnt see it...so if you want to remove that one line...you can do that if you would like.

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure I'm on my cellphone, and its night here. Tomorrow morning I will make those changes.
Thanks again dearie :)
Happy weekend ;)