Unborn Grief - Girls

This was very touching/strong.This normally happens in India.. I tried to pottery something which is real and which happens everyday - resources.

I'm in nirvana with angels

Got all love from them

Looking down

Weeping upside down

Trenchant for my mater 

Even for that begetter 

I was your part my mater

Wished to develop firm and tall

Just like my brother

But I was bumped off 

By my begetter

What was my mistake?

Is it just I was doll? 

I prayed for you mater

You live longer and stay firm

You loved me every single moment

You feed me with love and notions

Next time I want to be your doll

Please don't murder me

Live with me & don't leave me alone.

Author's Note

Genuine Comments Please :)

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Hmm.... that made me sad and happy at the same moment :(
Sad, because it actually happens at a much higher growth in India
Happy, because you wrote and described it so wonderfully..

The grief...the feelings wrapped in words beautifully..
nice one VikrantSingh Parmar....

Another amazing write :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Smilemspn :) Loved the review :)
- Singh :)

[Jack...]

I really don't know what to say my friend. This subject always brings tears to me eyes and the way you have presented it, I will never look at it the same again, still will see sadness in my heart, but different and deeper sadness. Very well written on a very deep subject.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank You So Much Jack :)
Yes indeed this is very emotional and touchy suject to anyone
Who knows love of life and daughter.
Thanks for your time and I value your review :)
Cheers!
-Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful poem with a very sad and touching subject. It is a sad reality when that happens and it scars families forever...You have penned with your great pen and sensitive heart a touching one indeed...Thank you for all...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Sami, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment/review :)
Loved it Mate :)
- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure , mate ...You are always welcome...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks again :) bro

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...