Unborn Grief - Girls

This was very touching/strong.This normally happens in India.. I tried to pottery something which is real and which happens everyday - resources.

I'm in nirvana with angels

Got all love from them

Looking down

Weeping upside down

Trenchant for my mater 

Even for that begetter 

I was your part my mater

Wished to develop firm and tall

Just like my brother

But I was bumped off 

By my begetter

What was my mistake?

Is it just I was doll? 

I prayed for you mater

You live longer and stay firm

You loved me every single moment

You feed me with love and notions

Next time I want to be your doll

Please don't murder me

Live with me & don't leave me alone.

Author's Note

Genuine Comments Please :)

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Hmm.... that made me sad and happy at the same moment :(
Sad, because it actually happens at a much higher growth in India
Happy, because you wrote and described it so wonderfully..

The grief...the feelings wrapped in words beautifully..
nice one VikrantSingh Parmar....

Another amazing write :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Smilemspn :) Loved the review :)
- Singh :)

[PP]

What can I say, thank you for creating the awareness Vikrant, it is a sad reality :(

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes, Prathama - we can't make changes but this is the truth we all educated people must understand girls are no more burden on anyone. Thank you so much for your time and review, much appreciated :)
- Singh :)

[Mark]

I've heard this happens, but I didn't realize it was so often! How do you change a culture? It's not easy. In China, a couple will abort a baby girl. As well as the killing of a baby, it will also result, (already has to some extent) in a lot of men without a wife.

but... how do you change a culture? Here in the U.S. there is a culture where income means more to men then to women. To a man his income is part of his attractiveness, his self-esteem, and he's stature in the society. To a woman income is a means to an end. There is a constant claim of unfair pay practices because women don't earn as much as men, but the root of it isn't that women are discriminated against, it's that to a man it means so much more he will fight for a raise, where a woman will just put up with what she gets.

How do you change a culture?

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes, Mark - this is open fact women are treated like this everywhere :(
We have to spread awareness to every single person on this earth they have self dignity and they must be treated equally.
Thank you so much for your time and review much appreciated :)
- Singh :)

[Will Neill]

It is barbaric and ignorant to kill baby girls, they are no lees a person than us. I feel very sad for them.
You said this well Singh.
Will

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Will for your time and understanding this topic so keenly,
Yes they were equal and they are equal :)
Much appreciated your review and your time on this poetry :)
- Singh :)

[Sherlock]

REALLY Good poem !!!! had lots of meaning and message !!!!

Next time I want to be your doll
Please don't murder me
Live with me & don't leave me alone.
......... loved these lines !!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Neha :)
Much Appreciate your time and review :)
- Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

"For she is a star that sparks the night skies. The light so bright she makes a voice so unheard but a light she never fades because she is a hope that one knows can change a universe. For a smile so bright she can make the mothers feel beautiful again and her fathers fall in love all over again because her eyes resembles the one he loves. For what love so divine, we forget that it is one that knows the meaning of an affectionate and an unconditional one she gives even though she is still an infant. This is what makes the world so beautiful. Why we are in such a world full of these haters we will never know but surely I want to change at least not one but two people's lives as I come into this world unclean but purely innocent of smiles for my heart is one that seeks out the beauty that is given to me by my creators."

What a sick and twisted world we live in my friend. It's not the ideal world where people just decide about it because it's the real thing. China does this too and it's just horrible. Have a good day though my friend :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much bro, definitely girls are not burden they are light in the darker room.
Son is son until he is married. Daughter's are daughter's till she dies :)
Thanks for reviewing my poem and sharing such a wonderful review ;)
- Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Yes they are! They are wonderful little gifts that come into this world after all!
They are and they will and they better be the example of a gentleman! Daughters are daughters are indeed. :)
You're very welcome my friend and I'm glad I did. :)
~ Zero :)

[Kristin Lee]

Strong, strong words. Especially "murder me."

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for you time and review Kristin. Have a wonderful weekend :)
- Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful and heart felt. Great poem Singh

[Vikrantsingh]

As always thanks BR for your lovely review :) Have a wonderful weekend :)
- Singh :)

[karan kotabagi]

I can see how much you feel and mean ......the truthful feelings of your poem really made me sad.........

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Karan :) Have a great weekend mate :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

A sad one for sure...and heartfelt...Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Rose thank you so much for your time and comment. Have a great weekend :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Touchy subject matter here Singh, you wrote it eloquently...the pics are as amazing as your poetry, nicely pen'd my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank You So Much Fredia :)
Always love your review on my page :)
Thanks :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Pleasure is always mine Singh. :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thanks again dearie :)