Caught In Rain

Just an attempt to make this worth, I hope you will like it

Holding & retention hands

Walk-to by

Rainfall Aha!

I saw those drops on your cheeks

Marring your mascara

Marring your Kohl (Kajal)

Your drizzle hair

Real mantrap pouring out

Palpitation body

I share my old jacket

You pull me near and gaze

You read all aspect in my mind

I begged for this time long back

Oh! God

Moisture lips osculating mine

That instant I felt I'm on the ball

& fall for you again

Tears & Rain mixed up

You taste my tears & rain

I'm crying - She knew

I gave tongue to 'I love you'

She said 'I cognise’

We nested hard.

Dedicated - Frieda P & Jack.

Author's Note

I wish this come in real ^ - ^

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I love walking in the rain so this one I felt with my heart.. Some of the lines in this are just beautiful.. The thought of a man being captured by the stringy wet hair and mascara lined eyes is an amazing visual.. We have warm rain here so it is nice to walk in and feel the dampness in your skin..Warmth in the rain that comes from a touch , is there anything better.. ? Well maybe walking on the beach in the rain.. lol
I really enjoyed this.. thank you.. shallimarRose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much, It was pleasure getting such a wonderful review from you ShallimarRose.
Thanks for reviewing and reading my poem :)
- Rain is always a wonderful - Everyone needs to fall in love :)
when it mixes up with Rain + Love = Superb Combination in all :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

You are welcome Singh.. I see you are with romantic heart.. Have a nice day.. shallimar

[Vikrantsingh]

My pleasure ^-^

[Sarmelendez]

very beautiful. i like this very much

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sarah :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Onku Ghosh]

A charmingly passionate poem......very beautifully written!!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Onku :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Zoya Sahai]

Love and romance oozes out of each word you've penned down. It's truly an exquisite picture that you've created here. Loved it!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Zoya :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Astro]

There's a beautiful image created in this piece with lovers in the rain. Hope it comes true for you too.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Astro :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Mark]

Same here, very beautiful poem. I enjoyed it very much.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Mark :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Zero_Edge88]

"To what beauty does the rain hold when we fall in love? Is it their drops? The clouds that gather? Or is it just the scene it makes when we are in the same umbrella! Beautiful they must be in the eye of the beholder but it is the heart that does the skipping for us and so is the way we make our way around the puddles. It is the pivotal feeling after all that we are shining brightly and so gracefully under the skies. Truly majestic and magically elevating this is the feeling we must feel when we are caught in the rain. This is to where we find our love truly together! A timeless memory as to know it is the beauty behind it for sure!"

Wish? my friend, I believe it is a reality one holds dear in their heart as it could become a memory than a fascination for you to hold and love forever in life :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Bro :) really loved your review and your attention towards this work :)
Stay Blessed and stay happy always :)

- Cheers!
Singh :)

[Marie]

I don't generally comment on love poetry, but this has such charm...

And the last line "We nexted hard" says to much ...

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Marie :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[one sky]

Love in the rain... nice concept, Singh. The rain always has a story to tell...just like mine.

This is awesome. Keep writing. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Margaux Yes its different love in rain :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I saw those drops on your cheeks

Marring your mascara

Marring your Kohl (Kajal)

Your drizzle hair"
So beautiful and well written with love and passion in mind and heart. Bravo

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Sami ^ - ^ :)
Cheers!
Singh :)

[Sami Khalil]

Cheers to you too( Grape juice )...You are welcome...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

I want Mango Shake Cheers!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...I love mango ...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Ŀ♡Ŀ hahahaha

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Nice...:)