Caught In Rain

Just an attempt to make this worth, I hope you will like it

Holding & retention hands

Walk-to by

Rainfall Aha!

I saw those drops on your cheeks

Marring your mascara

Marring your Kohl (Kajal)

Your drizzle hair

Real mantrap pouring out

Palpitation body

I share my old jacket

You pull me near and gaze

You read all aspect in my mind

I begged for this time long back

Oh! God

Moisture lips osculating mine

That instant I felt I'm on the ball

& fall for you again

Tears & Rain mixed up

You taste my tears & rain

I'm crying - She knew

I gave tongue to 'I love you'

She said 'I cognise’

We nested hard.

Dedicated - Frieda P & Jack.

Author's Note

I wish this come in real ^ - ^

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I love walking in the rain so this one I felt with my heart.. Some of the lines in this are just beautiful.. The thought of a man being captured by the stringy wet hair and mascara lined eyes is an amazing visual.. We have warm rain here so it is nice to walk in and feel the dampness in your skin..Warmth in the rain that comes from a touch , is there anything better.. ? Well maybe walking on the beach in the rain.. lol
I really enjoyed this.. thank you.. shallimarRose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much, It was pleasure getting such a wonderful review from you ShallimarRose.
Thanks for reviewing and reading my poem :)
- Rain is always a wonderful - Everyone needs to fall in love :)
when it mixes up with Rain + Love = Superb Combination in all :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

You are welcome Singh.. I see you are with romantic heart.. Have a nice day.. shallimar

[Vikrantsingh]

My pleasure ^-^

[Vani Jalagar]

Perfect....this moment would definitely occur in your life as wholeheartedly you have expressed how much you can love a woman beyond limits.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank again Vani :) I dream such a moment to strike my life.. But this is far now because im married and if I try this now. My happiness will be ripped off... :P
- Singh :)

[Vani Jalagar]

then those moments can be experienced with your wife......good luck....:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :)

[MOON]

Lovely heartfelt write.Picture paints the words.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Moon :) Thanks for your review and visit
- Singh :)

[Relic]

You share this with a romantic heart. Nicely done and nice pictures as well.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Retic :)
Stay Blessed :)
- Singh :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful love poem, Singh..

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Lori :) You keep reading my poems :D
-Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

A beautiful romantic ode. Great poem Singh. Keep writing

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much BR :)
Your review is always special and helpful for me :)
Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Oh God, now I'm doing a rain dance! I love walking in the rain, would be nice to have a sweet interlude as such, lovely my friend. :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Frieda :)
yes sure you must try raindance ;) xxx

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Singh, now all I need is someone to write me poetry in the rain. :-) xo

[Vikrantsingh]

Really, I will dedicate this for you no worries ;)

[Frieda P]

Wooooo, be still my heart! ♥ :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure it will let me make this changes to this poetry :D - By dedicating it for you :)

[Frieda P]

Oh geez, your wife is going to pull my hair! ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

I'm already bald now.. well she wont its just a poetry.. I know she's matured enuff to understand what exactly I'm expressing :)
No issues :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, if you say so but when you wind up in the dog house, don't come crying to me. ;-) ha x

[Vikrantsingh]

Roflism - Nope i won't.. :P. Hehehehehehe :D

[Frieda P]

hahaha is that how you run your household? ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Nope I keep some secrets too :D not everything must be share ;) correctly :D

[Frieda P]

Ha you keep digging a deeper hole, hope your wife's not peeking! ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Hahahahahahaha Nope she won't :P

[Sami Khalil]

In my library...:).......

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you ^ - ^

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Vikrantsingh]

^ - ^ :)....

[Sami Khalil]

^^~~^^ :)...

[Vikrantsingh]

;) :) ;) :P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Ruth]

So beautiful...this thrilled me x

[Vikrantsingh]

Poppy silver Thank You So Much for your review :)
- Singh ;)

[Ruth]

Welcome ;)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :)

[Prritiy]

nice rainy lovey dovey story in poetry :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Prritiy :)
God Bless :)
- Singh :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)