Caught In Rain

Just an attempt to make this worth, I hope you will like it

Holding & retention hands

Walk-to by

Rainfall Aha!

I saw those drops on your cheeks

Marring your mascara

Marring your Kohl (Kajal)

Your drizzle hair

Real mantrap pouring out

Palpitation body

I share my old jacket

You pull me near and gaze

You read all aspect in my mind

I begged for this time long back

Oh! God

Moisture lips osculating mine

That instant I felt I'm on the ball

& fall for you again

Tears & Rain mixed up

You taste my tears & rain

I'm crying - She knew

I gave tongue to 'I love you'

She said 'I cognise’

We nested hard.

Dedicated - Frieda P & Jack.

Author's Note

I wish this come in real ^ - ^

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

I love walking in the rain so this one I felt with my heart.. Some of the lines in this are just beautiful.. The thought of a man being captured by the stringy wet hair and mascara lined eyes is an amazing visual.. We have warm rain here so it is nice to walk in and feel the dampness in your skin..Warmth in the rain that comes from a touch , is there anything better.. ? Well maybe walking on the beach in the rain.. lol
I really enjoyed this.. thank you.. shallimarRose

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much, It was pleasure getting such a wonderful review from you ShallimarRose.
Thanks for reviewing and reading my poem :)
- Rain is always a wonderful - Everyone needs to fall in love :)
when it mixes up with Rain + Love = Superb Combination in all :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

You are welcome Singh.. I see you are with romantic heart.. Have a nice day.. shallimar

[Vikrantsingh]

My pleasure ^-^

[Frieda P]

I had to read this one again, still love it, how are you my sweet friend? You've been missed!

[Vikrantsingh]

Awww Frieda, Thanks you so much for your visit. I've been busy with my tight schedule and won't get much time to share my feelings.

Well i really miss you guys a lot :(

So, i jump in and check some work and go offline :/

Thanks again :)
- Singh :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the descriptions and feelings in this poem. Nice one.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Victoria :)

[Titan]

Great work my friend love it.
Will share this one
Learning more from you guys.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Supercop]

Love under rain what and act and narration

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Kristin Lee]

Dancing in the rain is fantastic! I love how you talk about her mascara dripping...that's so descriptive.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Very passionate, yet sparse piece. (I like that) Well-pennned.

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much for visit and reviewing my poem.
- Singh :)

[Cybertooth]

This Brilliant read..... amazing

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much :)

[Jack...]

Wow, so sensual and so hot. This one was moaning the entire way through. Loved everything until I got to the end and found it wasn't dedicated to me. :( Very nice my friend.

[Vikrantsingh]

Hey Jack I will dedicate it to you as well,
My apologies :) Loved your review :)
- Singh :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Just did check your name :D

[Jack...]

I saw that, you didn't have to do that, I was just kidding...but I am flattered. Thanks so much my friend. Anytime I get mentioned in the same sentence with Frieda, I am happy.

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow, you are always welcome Jack :)
You guys are my 2nd family. who always help me to learn more and more :)
- Cheers :)
Stay Blessed :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

Wow the flames are licking at the keyboard....smokin' hot!!! gotta love it!

[Vikrantsingh]

Thank you so much Scribbles :) Have a wonderful rest of the day ;)
Happy In advance weekend :)
- Singh :)