"What springs forth in our heart but the voice that our soul reaches out to? It's the sole purpose of one's voice that is often heard quietest in the stillness of a beautiful night. That is a sound and sight that love gives. It speaks in many forms, acts cordially with the beauty around it and mesmerizes those whose hearts long to spend the rest of their lives together." :)
Thank you Singh.
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Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you bro, I'm happy you loved it :)
Cheers!
Singh :)
Thank You So Much Thomas. I'm so happy you loved my poem.
Thank you again for you support and .. read moreThank You So Much Thomas. I'm so happy you loved my poem.
Thank you again for you support and review :)
-Singh :)
Very cute. The sentiments are very heartfelt. Though you would traditionally see the words "be my bride" how you have written "be my pride" works well too in a very subtle way since men tend to be very proud of their wives. Great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Kristin thanks again for reading my poem. Yes be my bride suits perfectly.
Will make changes a.. read moreKristin thanks again for reading my poem. Yes be my bride suits perfectly.
Will make changes as per you told me ;)
Thank you so much for reviews and helping me to improve always :)
You're such a lover my friend, very sweet, your wife must love this one! :-)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Frieda :) You're such a sweetheart :)
11 Years Ago
More like you're the sweetheart :-) My pleasure always...
11 Years Ago
Thank you *blushing*
11 Years Ago
Do you have an older brother? Lol ;-P
11 Years Ago
No, bad luck :P.. I wish - I was single :D Lol...
11 Years Ago
Oh my, I hope your wife doesn't read this!! ;-)
11 Years Ago
She won't :P.. I draft her these poems ;) she don't peep into this site ;D
Well thanks again F.. read moreShe won't :P.. I draft her these poems ;) she don't peep into this site ;D
Well thanks again Fredia :)
11 Years Ago
Ha good thing, or all the good you do would end up on your head! ;-)